The DOW spikes up, banking on
a dwarfish draft of Armageddon gloom.
Our president will speak at five.
No casualty is casual.
It's hard to match a suit and tie
to splatter of the coming blood.
Ahmed, a driver in Iraq, says:
"This is a miserable life.
We spent it shopping for war
or hiding from bombs."
He recites his summary
as if his time is finished as a boiled egg.
All eyes red from pressing
night's extended weight.
Justice spelled so many ways our alphabets
no longer know their proper forms.
Iraqis seal their windows shut as if a roll
of tape will come between the fragile glass
and force of missiles jetting
through the tainted sky.
Stirring the hostile soup.
It seems the only spoon we own,
yet who can watch the broth of freedom
dwindle to a water drop.
Have you ever sat on a fence,
answerless and trembling,
wishing posts were firm mirage?
I swing like heavy pendulums
between the prayer to end this horror
and nightmares of approaching graves.
The writer with no salving words,
no sonnets in a pocketbook.
No talons on the olive branch,
no wings of doves, no angels near
as embassies evacuate, as guns replace
the meetings of our shattered hearts
now beetles under heavy boots.
Philanthropy or wet revenge --
I can't decide and so I kneel
as quicksand travels to my chin.
This is great Janet, I also bought your book Calamity's Quilt and I am enjoying it thoroughly. I am also making notes on your style, it speaks loudly to me. Brava!
Nobody does it better!! "Justice spelled so many ways our alphabets no longer know their proper forms." is perfect at every level, and that repeating short-a toward the beginning [casual, casualty, splatter...] somehow helps set the tone. The subject could not be more somber, nor the talent glow more. Phyllis
Being a Janet Buck groupie, I have nothing BUT praise for this piece. The last stanza, though...{insert huge sigh} that last stanza drains the reader's emotions.
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on April 20, 2003
Janet good but the swiftly passing hand of time have already dated it and proven a change even with sacrifice can be good for a country. You will see a FREE PEOPLE IN IRAQ. You need to rewrite a new poem now as you see this unfolding. The USA
is a great country and you know that when you compare it with others. Where would you be and what would you do without the personal freedom you have to write this article. In Iraq, SADDAM might have cut your tongue out or his sons raped you.
Happy Easter and keep your spirits high.
Bill Murray.
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on April 20, 2003
Thoughtfully done. No matter which side you are on, it's a sad commentary on the times and human condition.
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on April 20, 2003
Goosebumps, just wish your stop killing our troops with (friendly fire) more of ours have died that way.. great write though..
If you tend to believe romantic, passionate, masculine poetry is a thing of past eras, read "She Intrigues Me," and be swept away in the beautiful craft of a contemporary poet of love.
The songs and art in this book are about our collective emergence after the pandemic and trauma of the last few years - comprised of 5 collections: World as Refuge, Where We Live, In Our Hands, Rhythms of Change and What We See & Sow.
Love, Janet C. xoxoxo
is a great country and you know that when you compare it with others. Where would you be and what would you do without the personal freedom you have to write this article. In Iraq, SADDAM might have cut your tongue out or his sons raped you.
Happy Easter and keep your spirits high.
Bill Murray.