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Everlasting Love
by Toris Okotie → (All Poetry by Toris Okotie)
  
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Inspired by the movie, “The Blue Lagoon”

 


If they where no priest nor rabbi


I’ll marry you alone


You, I, in an empty room


Only filled with love


I’ll take your hands


And say my words of vow


Then kiss your lips, for eternity.


Onto my lonely bed


I’ll make love to you, all night


Until the sun set still


My lips still hanging on yours


I’ll find the hidden curves of your bone


With the kindness of my lips


I’ll drive hard and slow


Until you finally get to your destination


That is, my promise of love


For each awaking morning


I’ll lie down beside you


Ready to wake you with a kiss


You, I, my queen, your king


A love, which was meant to last


 


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 Reviews of "Everlasting Love"
Reviewed by Jackson Aniefiok
Reviewed on May 27, 2008
This is a perfect love story its wordings are powerful and real, its all what a broken relationship needs to say and believe in to get back into business.. thank you.

Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)
Reviewed on October 1, 2003
A delicate and well written work.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
Beautiful write!

Reviewed by Floreann Cawley
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
beautiful..Floreann

Reviewed by Woman Words (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
and what a gorgeous promise it is....I love this line "I'll marry you alone"

Reviewed by J. Hart (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
This is very sweet. Nice job.

Reviewed on September 30, 2003
ahhh, this is so nice, toris; well done, my friend! :D (((HUGS))) and much love, your Texas friend, Karen Lynn.

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
Toris, this is very, very beautiful and inspiring! Well done!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
Ah, yes, and she will love your forever for all that. Enjoyable.

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
Excellent piece! True love is meant to last!


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