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Breia` C Gaskins

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Want & Need
by Breia` C Gaskins → (All Poetry by Breia` C Gaskins)
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moved on...now i want another chance with this new person..

We didn't even last long.
But I feel like it was forever.
I really, really like you.
And I wish we can be together.

But you won't give me a chance,
No I mean another one.
You keep on playing with my head
I hope your having fun.

Yeah, I know you said that your confused.
Well I'm confused too.
Because you know that I still like you
Or atleast I thought you knew.

Maybe I should be patient
And let things move at it's own speed
Yeah, thats what I should do
because your all I want and need.

 

 


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 Reviews of "Want & Need"
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 6, 2009
I really love this one and the thought process behind it, should use spell check if you can for there are a number of spelling mistakes that take away from the beauty of your work...example your should be you're, im should be I'm and thught should be thought. Hope you don't mind the tips....
Fee

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on November 6, 2009
I LIKE THE PHRASES, IMAGERY AND RHYME SCHEME. YOUR WORDS REMIND ME OF HOW JESUS FELT ABOUT ME...WHEN HE WAS CAJOLING AND TRYING TO GET ME TO BECOME 'HIS'...AND I REMEMBER...I WAS HESITANT AND 'CONFUSED' BUT...ALL HE WANTED WAS ME...NOW, I AM GLAD THAT HE WAS PATIENT AND WAITED FOR ME. WANT AND NEED...WELL WRITTEN AND ENJOYED. BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS


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