I can feel the imminent chill.
Oak leaves shiver on the outside
Of my thinly-draped window panes.
It is a half day.
The white-blue of southern sky
Shyly hides behind a most discourteous wind.
Discomfort rides in on a distant breath.
The encroaching climate pushes its way
Across this pitifully defenseless
November afternoon.
Here, in my room,
I can only stare in abject disbelief
As this bitter tide tries in vane
To force itself into my lungs.
I pull my ragged clothes around me,
Guarding my skin against the first attack
Of autumn’s antagonistic stir.
If it were spring I would rejoice
On such a day as this!
The sun, the white-blue sky, the dancing branches,
Insistent messengers, each, in turn,
To gain my full attention.
Sadly, their notes do not convey
The hoped for forecast of a warm weather front.
Instead, I hear a blithe warning,
A whimpered apology.
Between the restless shadows tapping on the glass,
The whispered word that winter comes.
Your poem makes me feel your mournful presence at times like this. I resonate with foreboding feelings of coming winter, myself. That's why I fled here from the north so long ago to escape the cold. But now winter still comes and all of my effort seems in vain.
Is the contrast between your Half Day and Odin Roark's view of winter only a matter of latitude? Of elevation? Surely not coincidental that you've posted on the same day. Neither of you have any poverty of concept and word play. But I'll trade either/both of you for some rain (or snow) - it has been a long time since we've had anything out of the sky but lightning fires and noisy drones.
Count your blessings, Bro... least you're not in the path of Haiyan. For me up here in a sunken valley of Oregon, the fall and winter represents but a few degrees change from spring weather. On occasion, we get a dusting of snow, but for the most part, mid 60s high, low 40s low. So why am I so happy, non of that pesky stuff you speak of, that's why. Damn, you're supposed to be in a moderate climate down there. You messin' with Aeolus and Zeus again? What am I gonna do with you?
This is a book of free verse poetry that addresses the seven main tests in life and offers some sensible solutions to passing those tests with minimal discomfort.
From the author of Jupiter Remembered and Until It’s Time: Embracing Life In Our Later Years comes Petals of Love: Poetry of a Woman’s Soul – a heartfelt collection spanning more than thirty-five years. Through tender reflections, these poems offer g
As usual, superb and moving.
Ron
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