...this song that trickles like a waterfall
in my mind, soft and gentle like a tickle.
And the silence whistles tonight,
a tune I don’t quite recognize.
I’m curious, so I listen: It whistles…
like a birdcall, a song without lyrics,
that sends a message, cheerful and bright;
a gentle cadence like a summer breeze
plays amongst the supple leaves
and petals heavy with the scent of night.
A flash of sound, a hummingbird in flight,
and I wonder, as I watch it go:
Where does it land when it leaves me?
And the silence whistles tonight,
a tune I struggle to remember.
It resonates inside my throat, my heart,
and my lips want to echo a reprise
to this song that trickles like a waterfall
in my mind, soft and gentle like a tickle.
I feel it close to me, then it recoils,
like swells that break and foam around my feet,
as I walk along the shore,
and then wane to disappear back into the sea,
and I wonder, as I watch it go:
After it touched me, to whom will it flee?
And the silence whistles tonight,
a tune it needs me to hear, no doubt.
One I’ve whistled myself, it seems,
though it was so long ago,
I had forgotten, somehow.
But it has traveled through the breeze,
the tune I whistled, cheerful and bright,
like a mischievous sprite, it played
amongst the supple leaves
and petals heavy with the scent of night,
and a traveler heard its sound.
Astounded, he listened: It whistles,
soft and gentle like a tickle... and he smiled.
Felt it like the swells that rushed and foamed
around his feet, when he walked by the shore
and wondered, as he watched it fly:
Where will it wander, when I set it free?
Carmen Ruggero © 2004
This piece was written for a very dear friend in the hopes to bring him comfort following the sudden death of his younger brother.
"I feel it close to me, then it recoils,
like swells that break and foam around my feet,
as I walk along the shore,
and then wane to disappear back into the sea,
and I wonder, as I watch it go:
After it touched me, to whom will it flee?"
A mature and sensitive write, full of artistry!
sueb
when you come back, you do so in style--this is a powerful, powerpacked, perfect write--welcome home :) you've been missed
((((HUGS)))) and love, karla.
Love the title to this wonderful 'dedication' to a friend -- the world is better place thanks to individuals such as yourself ... a beautiful write!!
Robert
I salute You, Most Sublime Poet!
Health and Wealth.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
the breeze comforts our souls as well as this wonderfully composed poem ...
i'm very glad to see you're posting ... hopefully you're feeling better and sorry to hear of your friend's loss ...
a tune it needs me to hear, no doubt.
One I’ve whistled myself, it seems,
though it was so long ago,
I had forgotten, somehow.
Carmen....You never cease to amaze me with your classic writes...yet another exceptional write from you....peace and love....BHUWAN!!!
Love Tinka
This is a real gem, one to treasure!
Carmen what a joy to see you back
and writing again! Praise Him!;-)
I do hope this poem brings your friend cheer...