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Where The Tide Comes From
by Carmen Ruggero → (All Poetry by Carmen Ruggero)
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This is a re-write of an earlier piece of the same title. It is a work in progress and will be a part of a larger piece of work. All comments are welcome.


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 And God said, "Let there be light," and there was light.


 


Early, on a bright sunny morn, free of burden or worry,
a child laughs and plays amongst nature’s wonders;
she wades on the river’s murky, shallow waters,
a kick, a splash – see the ripples foam around her toes –
lifts her gaze to where sky and water meet
and prompted by sudden curiosity, ponders:
 “Where does the tide comes from?


Mesmerized by the river’s lazy roll, she doesn’t see
small burnt sienna ripples rapidly gaining strength.
She sees them rolling and giggles as she wanders,
dipping her hands in the water, running, splashing
and letting it fall on her face – her own version of rain.


But tiny ripples soon turn into swells;
She sees them advance, feels their strength
as they come closer and closer to her
and very quickly rise to her waist.


She panics. 


She’s never known the river like this;
she fears the water will swallow her, she’ll die.
She tries running toward the river’s edge
struggling against the current but it overpowers her;
arms spread and swinging wild, she tries to get out;
she screams – can’t swim – she screams again
until exhausted, she finally gives up the fight. 


The water wins.


She can no longer see the muddy riverbed and
her foot’s caught on roots and branches
she cannot free herself and to no avail,
screams for help again, and again.


No one hears her plea.


She stands now with water slapping her chin,
as night falls quickly to hide the sun
and the moon shows her pallid smiley face,
and water obeys its signal to come in closer, closer yet.


"Come!” water tells the child.
 “Why? she cries, holding on to hope and fragile twigs.
“Come!” water whispers in reply.


The liquid voice seems soothing, somehow
and much to her surprise, the child surrenders without a fight.


The water is satisfied; carries her flaccid body away from shore,
deep into the undercurrent and the child struggles no more.


Her eyes are open. Perhaps death is like that, she thinks;
“Maybe it’s another way of living without a Mom, or a Dad”
She sees little whirlpools of mud lifting from the riverbed;
it all feels to her like a dream and she’s no longer afraid.


Suddenly, the water turns colder and changes hues
from earthy-red, to translucent shades of green  
and then she notices things she’s never seen before.
“Is this the ocean? How do those flowers grow?”
“Those are not flowers, they are coral.
There are mountains here and valleys, as well,
just as you have seen them on land.”
Then the child remembers wondering...
“Is this where the tide comes from?”
“No. For that, I’ll have to take you to the end of time.”


Soon after having said that, water lifts itself
from the ocean bed in violent, and vociferous roar.
Water turns to fire, and fire into air, and light
becomes darkness, and sound stops.


She’s adrift and can no longer hear the water’s voice;
she hears nothing… nothing but the breath of silence
then way, far away, there’s a tiny twinkling light.
She is drawn to it and slowly drifts through space
twirling and tumbling till she’s very, very close
and she’s there – can almost touch it.
Then, the light begins to spread itself throughout;
wider and wider till there’s no more night.
The young child moves into its warmth
The light rocks her in its gentle arms and whispers:


“This is where the tide comes from.”


Carmen Ruggero .2005


 


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 Reviews of "Where The Tide Comes From"
Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on November 23, 2005
My heart went into my mouth then back to my chest where it settled into a brighter glow. Thank you, Carmen. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on November 20, 2005
Wonderful !

Reviewed by Robert Montesino
Reviewed on November 14, 2005
A Wonderful start to an enchanting story Carmen, Well done!

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on November 9, 2005
Pure enchantment, Carmen! Very much enjoyed this precious creation.
Peace,
Carolyn

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on November 8, 2005
wow...amazing piece Carmen...i enjoyed its startling beauty very much...

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 7, 2005
Superbly done, Carmen. Thank you for sharing your gift. Love and peace.

Regis

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 6, 2005
This is truly a magnificent piece, Carmen. Brava!

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on November 6, 2005
Masterful writing. I enjoyed this and look
forward to its continuance. :)

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on November 6, 2005
I agree with Eileen that, if I HAD read this before, I would have remembered it - like "The Flying Wheat Tail"! You ARE a yarnspinner for certain sure, Carmen, and the conclusion that you skilfully work towards through (I also agree with Calvin!) this cocktail of "magic realism" is powerful and relieving - also quite delightful. I do apologise if I'm off on a tangent here, but I think this beautiful and sensitive write would translate wonderfully if it were slanted slightly to aim for children who are coping with the confusion of bereavement. Just a thought. And thanks for yours on my last night's post - much appreciated! :)) Kate xx

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on November 5, 2005
Shear brilliance. How the bloody heck did I miss this poem.
One of the most unique inspiring poems I have read.
One class act is this...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 5, 2005
OMG this is one beautiful serene poem that I would like to be part of the day I die.....and in peace my soul will forever be!!

Keeping this one for sure...thank you Carmen!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Debashish Haar
Reviewed on November 5, 2005
There is a rare struggle in this poem, a struggle you hardly find outside magical realism. I liked the rawness of the brooding imagery. There are so many places when the narrative grabbed me.

Calvin-n-Hobbes

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 5, 2005
You have delved deep within your soul for this poem, Carmen. That it is to be part of a larger work bodes well for us here at Ad if you desire to post the enture saga. This piece is surrealistic, with the light hand of spirituality shinning through.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on November 4, 2005
I hope you post the final piece here at AD. Love the way you bring the question through out the entire writing, bringing it to the ending with an answer that touches the soul. Great write.

Reviewed by Shoma Mittra
Reviewed on November 4, 2005
Brilliant poetry. Written in epic propotions. And it pulls at the heart strings. Would love to read the piece in its entirety.

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on November 4, 2005
Carmen, I DO remember this. It swept me up like the tide then and did again. A true beauty. Can't wait to hear what it is you're doing with it. Dawn

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 4, 2005
Carmen this is totally mesmerizing. I don't recall having read it before, but think I would have remembered. It is such an intriguing piece. Outstanding work. It could have easily been very sad, but somethow you managed to make acceptable what happened to the child.I look forward to more of it.Thanks for sharing!


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