John, I liked this part best: "crotchety pain in the ass whistling
as he comes searching for a song,
an image, a line, a word, as he goes
merrily berrily among the throng." I too can sometimes be a big pain in the ass. Great write. Bill
Perhaps "..Quiet Storm" will help rekindle old flames buried and long forgotten or express the love so deeply locked inside of your soul longing to be released.
Regardless of where you may be found in love this beautiful masterpiece can be
Amor
Love Tinka
as he comes searching for a song,
an image, a line, a word, as he goes
merrily berrily among the throng." I too can sometimes be a big pain in the ass. Great write. Bill
Wonderful poem John......much enjoyed......ty, Dani
magical and enchanting read! i enjoyed--great write! wonderful meter and rhyming!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)