Crimson’d purple clouds
look down upon paired lovers
strolling hand in hand-
while empty handed i walk
the darkening shadowed beach
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Reviews of "sunset beach -- sanil's challenge"
Reviewed by Jimmy Mills (Reader)
Reviewed on April 8, 2003
John--your work said alot in a few words. It's exceptionally written. Nice Tanka. Never tried it before. I guess that now is a good time to start :-). Thanks for sharing. Jim
Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on April 7, 2003
Thank you friend this is indeed beautiful ... thanks a lot for this beautiful lines
Still Living on my Feet is the follow up to Tichaona Chinyelu’s first book, In the Whirlwind, which was rooted in a sense of hard-hitting revolutionary black love. However, in this sophomore effort, Tichaona brings the revolutionary essence from deep
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excellent,
I have not yet to write a tanka, Am looking forward to my first.....thanks for sharing
William
Absolutely beautiful with so few words. 10+
Nancy
Reindeer
Thanks for taking the time with "Catholic," the greatest profundinties are simplistic on the surface, some say.
excellent verses for the challenge
Peg