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Boy Meets Girl (innocence)
by William Bonilla → (All Poetry by William Bonilla)
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She looked at me
I at her
Eyes not lying
I want her bad

She smiles
I grin
I think
I'm in

Am I shy?
Is she shy?
I wonder why
Are we connecting
Everything seems just right

How's my breath?
Hu! Hu! Hu! not bad
smells like peanut butter
And chocolate

She thinks he's insane
Or is that poor boy
Just lame?
Wonder what's his name?

He is cute
Why is he not talking,
to me?
Is he shy?

I don't know why
he looks so cool
He looked at me
I at him.

By: William Bonilla
3/18/04

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 Reviews of "Boy Meets Girl (innocence)"
Reviewed by Todd Cheney
Reviewed on March 20, 2004
I like the way the pespective changes to the girl's in the second part.

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on March 20, 2004
This is a romantic poem that leaves creases in heart!

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on March 20, 2004
William, This was so carefree it seemed to float around my mind. Very well written! Lisa

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 20, 2004
Peanut Butter Breath - Could have been worse!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 19, 2004
Sweet..peanut butter...hehehehe cute!!

Love this one!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 19, 2004
captures the moment very vividly ...

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on March 19, 2004
This is so wonderful William!

Reviewed by Nancy D.
Reviewed on March 19, 2004
Memories to look back on.

Nancy

Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Reviewed on March 19, 2004
Refreshing! William, you illustrated the 'difference' very well...cute, too.

Gina

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 19, 2004
Yes...sounds like teenagers...young love...
good writing william..enjoyed this...
floria

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 19, 2004
William,Wonderful capture of boy meets girl,
so romantic, brought back giddy memories;-)

Reviewed by Franz Kessler
Reviewed on March 19, 2004
Wonderful observations and lovely write! Everything starts with the glimpse of an eye! Franz

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on March 19, 2004
Yes times have changed ... but there are still times today when she shy and innocent begin their romance with a shy glimpse of the other. Excellent poem William. Bill Murray

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on March 19, 2004
Times have changed since this write was the way, Bill, or so I am told, its been so long since I experienced all that...LOL! Still a fun memory...Peace, Ed & rufuz


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