At The Edge Of Infinity (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 7, 2004

(((william)))

WOW--awesome write!! vividly and lovingly illustrated--BRAVO!

((((HUGS)))) and love, karla.

meant to leave a review on "silky sheets," got so excited, i slipped *grins* sorry 'bout that--that one was WOW!!!!!!! LOL

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on April 4, 2004

"At The Edge Of Infinity"... the protagonist in this poem needs to reach the ball of fire and meet his true love!(Grin)

Yes, a sad story on the illusion of love and loss. Millions have pssaed through it.

I have learned from the contents and message.

I Salute You, Poet!

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on April 4, 2004

Deep emotions!

~ May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel ~

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on April 4, 2004

William....very moving write my friend...superbly written...love n luck....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Dee C.

Reviewed on April 4, 2004

A most excellent write William!!
It touches a place deep within that is hard to reach at times.
Dee

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on April 4, 2004

Extremely powerful write, William.

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on April 4, 2004

A deep and superb poem. Excellent!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 4, 2004

Very deep touching poem William!!

Thanks for sharing!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on April 3, 2004

superbly deep write...
Thanks for sharing William.....

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 3, 2004

your images are becoming more powerful and decoratively detailed ...

Reviewed by Sheila Jones (Reader)

Reviewed on April 3, 2004

William,
This is an exceptional piece...
Heart-rending, beautifully authored!

Love, Sheila

Reviewed by Regina Pounds

Reviewed on April 3, 2004

Eloquence and candor.

great writing
Gina

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 3, 2004

Superb poetry William! you keep pushing the envelope, bravo!

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on April 3, 2004

wow.......
very intense!

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on April 3, 2004

You get better and better, William...I mean, of course, your poems
do.
I enjoyed this one immensely!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on April 3, 2004

Willam,
Gorgeous emotions.
"My mind tries
To demise all the memories
Of you
Within my thoughts
My heart still aches
From the passion, you brought
Into my life."

Peg

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on April 3, 2004

Excellent poem William. But when my mind arrives at infinity, I can always imagine nothingness with one more step. Bill Murray

Reviewed by Monette Bebow-Reinhard (Reader)

Reviewed on April 3, 2004

This is heartbreaking! What a beautiful write! Thanks for sharing your heart and your pain. I feel I know them well.
Monette

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on April 3, 2004

Very moving Bill, well told..

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 3, 2004

nice write, bill! enjoyed~

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on April 3, 2004

This was excellent! Beautiful, just felt every word so deeply this morning, I loved this,

Reindeer