The Tricycle (Challenge Poem) (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 31, 2004

I've been seeing your name everywhere with people trying to beat your challenge. Hehehe. They've got a hard row to hoe. LOL

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on October 31, 2004

Wow! William, I love Halloween cuz I love all the scary stuff. You had my skin crawling here... I'll give this another shot... no promises but check out my recent poem "Beware"... maybe THAT will scare you. (grin) Yours has "goosebumps" written allllll over it! hehe... thanks. katy xox.

Reviewed by Sandra Corona

Reviewed on October 29, 2004

William, fantastic write! Nice to have a challenge for Halloween :)!
:)Sandy

Reviewed by Pier Tyler

Reviewed on October 26, 2004

A challenge, hmmm! Scary too! I will never look at tricycles the same. I'll accept the challenge, though. William this is a great write. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Hugs,
Pier

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 25, 2004

watch out! Sid feels like a kid again ...

very unique horror scene ...

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on October 25, 2004

who would have thought of a tricycle in a horror poem. this is great

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on October 25, 2004

a tricycle? you've got one creative mind, William. i'm pretty easily spooked and these horror writes may haunt me this week. maybe i'll give it a spin... Dawn

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 25, 2004

O' I ride my tricycle well!!

Scary thought it chasing you around in the dark!!

Excellent challenge "Thingy" to write about!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 25, 2004

Excellent Horror write, William, and I will attempt to meet your excellent challenge.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on October 25, 2004

William, you've given me chills! Halloween is right around the corner, and the fright tales are spinning!
I have to offer my current showing poem as my answer to your challenge...hope that is sufficient!

Lisa

Reviewed by Alice Cooper (Reader)

Reviewed on October 25, 2004

Thanks so much William for setting the pace. Excellent challenge for AD. Good idea. Your friend Bill

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on October 24, 2004

And I was thinking about going to bed. Great write, William.

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on October 24, 2004

Ohhhh! This was better than the ones we heard at Girl Scout Camp. Very good and scary write.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on October 24, 2004

I don't know Bill, but I thought this could have gone on, I felt as though I expected more, maybe a second chapter or like that...? Scary stuff can always be expanded upon...looking forward to the scares I get this week from this challenge...Peace thru Horror, Ed & "Sid"

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 24, 2004

A challenge I can live up too :-) Very spooky creative write.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 24, 2004

HOly Moly William! This is fantastic. A real scare thriller!
Fightnight material for sure! Good challenge too !;-)