The pain of sadness
Reflecting in your eyes
Can't hide
Your true feelings inside.
~~*~~
Your beautiful smile
Is but a masquerade
To your soul
For a while, before it fades.
~~*~~
Hold me my darling
In your arms
Let me feel
The warmth, of your pain.
~~*~~
To feel the beat
Of your broken heart
As I, hold you tight
Share your pain, with me tonight.
~~*~~
Let me wander
Through your thoughts
Serching for memories divine
Bringing you back, to our time.
~~*~~
Renew your happiness
Like Spring does
The lillies Of the fields
Or as the rose, blossoms anew.
~~*~~*
I wish, to see stars
Sparkling in your eyes
To see you smile
As the doves, fly in the skies.
~~~*~~~
By: William Bonilla
11/07/02
Oh William, This one is
so tender and sweet...
Beautiful....
Trixie :)
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on June 1, 2003
Oh my dear William this was indeed just the PERFECT PIECE I needed today to soothe my troubled soul...such beautiful, tender, emotional words...I love it!!!!
~Nikki~
Nobleman's son, Todd Ramble, returns home after years abroad and finds himself falling in love with his step-sister, who was now a grown woman. Unfortunately their love is brutally challenged by his tyrannical father.
glad that there are a few left who can see behind the mask of hope-
wonderfully done
You are so wonderful at this. I felt DEEP soul in these words.
Thanks,
Teresa
~Joseph
Just lovely, from your heart.
Nancy
Reindeer
Nice flow.....
~MoNi~
this soul shaking and heart
breaking beauty in this tender
compassionate love poem
Peggy
May Lu $*_*$ a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Chrissie
With Love,
Jill :)
I hope she was able to let you in.
Blessings,
Diane
Of your broken heart
As I, hold you tight
Share your pain, with me tonight
Okay!! This is outstanding...I just adore it!!
Love
Tinka...lovesick puppy!!
so tender and sweet...
Beautiful....
Trixie :)
~Nikki~