Come To Me (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on June 9, 2003

This is breathtaking, William.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on June 9, 2003

William...gem of a write my friend...BHUWAN

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on June 9, 2003

Oh my William who could say no to such delightful sensuous enticement...EXCELLANT!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on June 8, 2003

Very nice William!

Jack

Reviewed by Nancy D.

Reviewed on June 8, 2003

This says, take me now! Excellent William.

Nancy

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 8, 2003

passionately persuasive...

Reviewed by Debra Stiles, The Original Mister (Reader)

Reviewed on June 8, 2003

Bravo...
So enticing...
Mister

Reviewed by Melissa Rives

Reviewed on June 8, 2003

Beautiful passionate write, I really enjoyed this! :)

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on June 8, 2003

A passionate wonderful write. Exceptional! ~Trish~

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on June 8, 2003

Great Write, William!

tony

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on June 8, 2003

William, this is smooth and refreshing!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 8, 2003

Wonderful William, very passionate!

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on June 8, 2003

So beautiful and softly romantic, just lovely,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on June 8, 2003

William,
Beautiful, romantic and very passionate. Excellent.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on June 8, 2003

thanks for sharing.....

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on June 8, 2003

I, too, love your romantic poetry!!!! Thank you......
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on June 8, 2003

Aaaaahhhhhh!!!!!....so very inviting indeed! Well-said, William!

May Lu $*_*$ a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on June 8, 2003

I did a poem with the same title....I liked yours more....okay!!

Come To Me

Oh! Come to me
Oh! Come and do surrender
Then my heart may grow tender
I will send you my heart
That you may kiss
As often as you choose
In spite of all my plans
Ending my love for you
Is harder than it seems
Oh! Come to me
Oh! Come and do surrender
For the sake of peace
I make this call
Now therefore come to me
Oh! Come to me
And then you quickly feel
No bitterly repent
Before it is too late
For a woman in love
Oh! In spite of all my plans
Ending my love for you
Oh! Come to me
�You�

Love Tinka

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