In the secured
Darkness of my room
Hands interlocked
Under my head
A thousand mile stare
Through the ceiling
Not really looking
Anywhere
Within my mind I see
The wondrous
Stars
Illuminating the velvet
Heavens of the universe.
~~*~~
Wondering who's heart
Pants out of control
That you're near
As mine fibrillates
Without a beat
But in cadence
With a tear
Flowing down my face
The night is warm
The Moon is full
Moon beams falling
Into place.
~~*~~
Blessing my room
Through the slits
Of my soul's
Blinds
In my dreams
Your smile
Teases me
From a thousand miles
Oh, come to me
My precious, heal my soul
Re kindle the embers
within
As they turn cold
Your lips I wish to kiss
Before I draw, my last breath
For he who is knocking
Is call death.
~~*~~
This is both sweet and sad. I enjoyed this a lot. It's filled with wonderful imageries. While inside your room, you have the whole universe within yourself.
Very dreamy, beautiful, and yet written with enough longings to give this a sad note.
Wonderful indeed!
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on June 15, 2003
Hey William, Happy Fathers Day! Excellent write, I enjoyed it!
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In Spirit,
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~Joseph
Beautiful, sad and excellent.I love this.
~Chrissie
Mister
well done
Reindeer
This is an excellent piece.
peggy
Nancy
This is both sweet and sad. I enjoyed this a lot. It's filled with wonderful imageries. While inside your room, you have the whole universe within yourself.
Very dreamy, beautiful, and yet written with enough longings to give this a sad note.
Wonderful indeed!
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
tony