We met at the alter
Family and friends
Before us, To bear witness
With awe and emotions
As we hold, each other's hands
Vowing, before the Creator
Of our love and devotion
To keep, the flames burning
Eternally within us
We recite our Holy Vows
With the innocence
Of this, our love divine
Praying our needs
For one another
We keep
Throughout, our concept of time.
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By: William Bonilla
4/01/03
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Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on July 13, 2003
Agree with Joseph. Very well done.
Love this one.
S
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on July 13, 2003
William, everything you touch, every word you write becomes a beautiful poem. You have some of the very finest peotry at AD.
Publish a small book ok? Bill
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Love this one.
S
Publish a small book ok? Bill
This is a beautiful description of the Wedding day!
~Joseph
But To him this is not funnyyy!!
Love
Tinka
Hope it does last forever, well done..