Awesomely written William!!
A collision, must occur
Between you and I
To rejuvenate, my exsitence
With you, within me
Or I within you.
Wow!! great lines here!!
OOh, this was lovely, WIlliam. I like the correlation of your love to the planetary realm. In your 4th line, perhaps you want to say "along" instead of "alone"?
Your blazing trail, Like golden silky hair
Loose in the wind
The glowing body,
Like your smile.
As I watched you
Heading towards a destiny
Traveling millions of miles
I pray it be to me.
This is just gorgeous.. The galaxy should be honored with this write of true love and inspiration.
PS Bonilla is a unique name I once knew a Millie Bonilla in Wisconsin.
Reindeer
This is excellent.
"A collision, must occur
Between you and I
To rejuvenate, my exsitence
With you, within me
Or I within you. "
PJ
LM
In Spirit,
Bear
~Joseph
A collision, must occur
Between you and I
To rejuvenate, my exsitence
With you, within me
Or I within you.
Wow!! great lines here!!
Love Tinka
Julie :)
~Chrissie
Your blazing trail, Like golden silky hair
Loose in the wind
The glowing body,
Like your smile.
As I watched you
Heading towards a destiny
Traveling millions of miles
I pray it be to me.
This is just gorgeous.. The galaxy should be honored with this write of true love and inspiration.
PS Bonilla is a unique name I once knew a Millie Bonilla in Wisconsin.