AuthorsDen.com   Join | Login    
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    BOOKS    SAMPLE CHAPTERS    AUDIOBOOKS    eBOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    VIDEOS    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  J and C Wordsmiths, iLeanne Bright Cloudman, iDebra Kraft, iSusan Smith, iMargaret Evans, iTerry Vinson, iPawan Mishra, iAlexander Shaumyan, iErin Kelly-Moen, iWilliam Martell, i

  Home > Romance > Poetry        Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry        Authors: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z     

William Bonilla

 Follow Me  

· Contact Me
· Poetry
· Stories
· Blog
· 1,425 Titles
· 19,534 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Nov, 2002

William Bonilla, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.



Out Of Place
by William Bonilla → (All Poetry by William Bonilla)
  
Share   Print  Save   Follow   Share on Facebook


Was I, dreaming?
On that first beautiful
Lovely day of spring
When we met, like lovers
On the silver screen.

Was I, dreaming?
When I, first held your hand
So obviously, as lover's do
When everything is green.

Was I, dreaming?
when I held a Rose
Against, the loveliness
Of your face.

To compare your beauty
The Rose, lost with dignity
Tell me, was I out of place?

To dare compare
God's greatest creation
To the loveliness,
of your face.

By William Bonilla
12/01/03

Want to review or comment on this poem?


Need a FREE Reader Membership?


 Reviews of "Out Of Place"
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on December 4, 2003
William...gem of a write my friend....perfect!!!!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 4, 2003
you have expressed with heart and soul every woman's dreams ...

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on December 4, 2003
This was sensuality at its finest. Oooh, this is library material for me :) UUGH ...man this poem was unbelievable! Beautiful BEAUTIFUL work. Appreciated this.

Thank You,
Emilie

Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on December 4, 2003
William...very nice! This has a classical flavor...it brings to mind a visual of a knight and his lady in private conversation, hidden away in a garden.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 4, 2003
William, a glorious love poem! The beauty in your last verse is what women dream they'll hear from the one they love!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 4, 2003
O' William this is 'Godly'...it is the most beautiful words a man can ever say to the one he loves!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on December 4, 2003
Oh my!
I hope you weren't dreaming, but if you were,
those are lovely thoughts indeed.
Thanks for sharing them!

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on December 4, 2003
Beautifully romantic, William. Lovely.
~Chrissie

Reviewed on December 4, 2003
"Out Of Place" is saying it in full.

One can never be "out of place" when in love, because love arrows the way to happiness.

I enjoyed reading "Out Of Place".

Keep posting.

Thank You.

Healthy Long Life, Poet!


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on December 4, 2003
omg this is soooooooooo romantic...if it was a dream, don't wake up!


New Poetry by William Bonilla
Popular Poetry (Romance)
  1.  Woman, Where Art Thou?
  2.  The Light of Gensan
  3.  Dance on the Beach (photo Daisy 6 14
  4.  Essences of Passion
  5.  How Much I Love You
  6.  My Only Light
  7.  Paradise Found
  8.  Distant
  9.  Beautiful
  10.  Yes Dear
  11.  When the Heart Soars
  12.  Beacons
  13.  Yet Still We Love
  14.  Ode To His Eyes
  15.  A Vintage Romance
  16.  Once in a Dream
  17.  The Magic of Words
  18.  Entranced by her Smile (a tribute to
  19.  Love in Perpetuity
  20.  Lady In Red
Free Book Review Program
Select a book to read and review today!

Crowley County Series, Novels 1-3 by Trennis Killian

The Crowley County Series, Novels 1-3  
Member BookAds

Guardian Seductress: Sisters of Emsharra 1 by Gracie McKeever

Alex Ryan discovers he's not who and what he thought he was from a woman who's been watching him his entire life…and who isn't human  
Member BookAds

The Forever Stone by Gloria Repp

A young widow joins her aunt’s house-restoration project in the wilderness, determined to take a stand for independence, but two men have different plans for her—and so does God.  
Member BookAds