You have used the device of repetition here to good effect. I too have used some repetition when I think it might work or the theme warrants it. In your poem, the repetition, rather than being in any tedious, actually highlights more effectively the other points you are making. Interesting poem. I'm glad I tracked it down. John
This book consists of a 150 pages of Christian poetry about the end of time and the Second coming of Jesus Christ not as a servant but as a King, the King of kings. To bring righteousness and peace to the earth and restore the government of God! Peac
Reflections and Nature Watercolors is a collection of Margaret's spontaneous positive thoughts in celebrating and reflecting on life and her nature watercolors.
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