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The Wall
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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 The hardest wall I've ever climbed is the one I could not see
Built there by the King of Hearts who loves unconditionally
But all the same in Love's own game it's when the wall keeps blocking
The very path to bring it down but alas! It keeps on mocking
This pain is real and makes me look upon all the crude hard doubt
Of love that comes and builds this wall then puts it's own love out.
For love can hold on for a lifetime and never let you go
But when you hide behind a wall then you really ...never know
The beauty of a fuller heart is when it never yearns
It doesn't recognize the pain until it starts to burn
Freedom gives us every breath we take unconsciously
Once the Wall has had it's way...it's more conditionally
Then with the wall it hides away and dies with every beat
Of a rhythm made...  one of a kind... for you... in its defeat!
 
Love,
Susan
 





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 Reviews of "The Wall"
Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick
Reviewed on June 1, 2004
well done

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on April 6, 2004
Absolutely beautiful

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)
Reviewed on April 5, 2004
I thought Pink Floyd when I saw the title too !!
Very well formed poem and thought

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 2, 2004
I was thinking of Pink Floyd and seeing the Great Wall from space when you sprung the hardest kind on me, the psychological kind.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on April 2, 2004
very creative susan...loved reading this..
walls...we all put them up don't we....
floria

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on April 2, 2004
Susan,
Stunning beauty this one is and love the pic..

Peace~
Peg

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on April 2, 2004
Susan, beautiful poetry. Love the flow of this. Walls are built for many reasons but the hardest to scale are those of the mind. I think we've always been a world of wall builders.

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on April 2, 2004
INSIGHTFUL poem, Susan!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 2, 2004
Excellent Susan!!

Is that what the real Wall looks like?

Never really seen it before..heard of it tho!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by William Manchee
Reviewed on April 1, 2004
A very insightful poem. I really enjoyed it.

Reviewed by Jim Dunlap
Reviewed on April 1, 2004
Original and striking idea. This line:

Of a rhythm made... one of a kind... for you... in it's defeat!

"it's" should be its.

Jim Dunlap


Reviewed by Larry Rochelle
Reviewed on April 1, 2004
That's some wall ... some defeat.


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