
It's been a very long time carrying this inside Long years of comfort tinged with confusion is settled The absolute security of having a full shine is more direct today Inside ... there is a haven where you dwell
My safe place
Here where we never guess Where there is no judgement No one enters and chaos is never allowed Not where the spirit of this lover and the soul of her heart reigns Where we always begin to shine and never pale In here... in this white hot core ...
This haven
We have our dreams... our way
Infinity seems real There are no doubts nor repenting and regrets Here we have taller years We make better use of time Our thoughts have credence Being accountable to one another is ... Most important Ethics is more than a word Here we admit to immortality We live and hold to every morsel that's positive
Time is tasted
Here values are treasured Our sorrows are outlived Tender caresses of faith ... shine In this haven...our safe place
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excellent positive poetry ...
this is so beautiful and serene--i love seeing your happy place :)
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Beautiful Susan...we should all discover that part inside....
Love Tinka
That "core" where our deepest reveries are stored, is priceless.
You portrayed it well, although I would suggest eliminating the last
2 words of the poem, as they seem superfluous, and must have meaning
only for the reader who is 'the other half.'
enjoyed
William