Shall We Dance... (poem) by Susan K. de Vegter on AuthorsDen

Shall We Dance...
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
Rated "PG" by the Author.

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Lets dance in the pale of moonlight As love dribbles and worms down the curves Lets do all the free things we dream about Wakening all the new nerves. Dance with me with caresses Cuddle each cold waiting spot Kiss away tingles that cause a fear Nibble the freckles...each dot. Glide in this glen full of pleasures Kiss me deeper than ... then Cherish each move of a fancy Whenever you're ready say "when". Smile as you dance with new pleasures Curve upon curve that moves in Taking these moments of passion Beginning again and again. Float on the nigth mist above me Settle your aim and descend Come to me lover of my heart I'm open to all you can mend. Kiss's the dose that is needed Smiles upon smiles that merge Fluids of love that are blending Moving curve upon curve. Shadows of dancing pleasures Silhouttes making the swoon Fitting together as one right now Settled... us two... with the moon. Copyright 2005

Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)

Reviewed on August 3, 2007

wow...save a dance for a dark knight should the AD ever have a Convention! Lovely poetry

Reviewed by Mary Quire

Reviewed on February 20, 2005

Very passionate.

M.Rose

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on February 19, 2005

Susan...another gem of a write from you my dear friend....your ending was superb...love n luck...BHUWAN

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

Passionately captivating, Susan. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Exquisite write, Susan; reflects that well-seasoned view of life...
Best,
Carolyn

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on February 17, 2005

This reminds me of a song called Dance With Me. This is a really nice poem as Tinka says.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Oh boy you are on the roll with this VeRy NiCe poem!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Whew!!! Suan! You broke me out in a sweat with this one, you surely did. This is such a sensuous and lovely poem. It just . . . says so much within such a few words. Good.