hmmmnnn this is as Karla stated an intriquing poem, it hints at an illicit but loving relationship and the comparison steel to stone is a stand out feature of this one that I truly like. If it is from personnal experience you have captured it well if it is not then your imagination danced into the night of lovers tryst with this one.
Either way great work my friend.
Hugs
Felix
You expound much inner wisdom and conviction in this exquisite and tasteful poem Susan
Yeh...the vital ingredient is to believe...believe implicity in God, and yourself !
Peter
This is my personal inspirational book of poetry. It contains many poems written for family, friends, and relevant life situations. Hopefully you will find some that will encourage and inpsire you in whatever arena you are found in your circle of l
Using Calgary as a backdrop the author satirizes the self-serving nature of the public as it continues to fatten itself, not only physically, but egotistically as well.
Ron
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Either way great work my friend.
Hugs
Felix
Excellent, intriguing verse; well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Yeh...the vital ingredient is to believe...believe implicity in God, and yourself !
Peter