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Metal to Stone
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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"By contrast…Lo!
The Flint to Steel
By spark to flame
Their thoughts reveal
That He the Metal
She the Stone
Had cherished secretly
Alone."

In awed respect
Flickered a flame
In thoughts for capture
None to blame
For in their spirit’s
Restless flight
Their flame grew on
Brighter…Bright

The nights were tasted
Theirs to own
As daylight fades
It’s shadowed form
They stole another
Blissful eve
Because they chose
To believe.

As metal drapes
Itself to stone
In ecstasy
They’re not alone
For lovers / friends
Eternal plight
Is live for days
To love for nights.

With purloined rhythm
Hearts beat close
They loved till dawn
As sun arose
Flint to Steel
Their Metal honed
Content once more…for days alone.

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 Reviews of "Metal to Stone"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 2, 2006
This one is sweet.

Ron

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 1, 2006
A captivating offering Susan!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 1, 2006
hmmmnnn this is as Karla stated an intriquing poem, it hints at an illicit but loving relationship and the comparison steel to stone is a stand out feature of this one that I truly like. If it is from personnal experience you have captured it well if it is not then your imagination danced into the night of lovers tryst with this one.
Either way great work my friend.
Hugs
Felix

Reviewed on March 1, 2006
Susan,

Excellent, intriguing verse; well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 1, 2006
Quite a captivating piece, Susan.

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on March 1, 2006
You expound much inner wisdom and conviction in this exquisite and tasteful poem Susan
Yeh...the vital ingredient is to believe...believe implicity in God, and yourself !
Peter


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