Lost In Vain (poem) by Susan K. de Vegter on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 28, 2006

Lost love is always in vain.

Ron

Reviewed on October 26, 2006

No need to dust this one off, The cloak of years has rendered it timeless. This is my heart, and it's scars, you've penned so perfectly. Love Pierre.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 26, 2006

I love the rhyming couplets Susan; and the meaning within your verses. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 26, 2006

Excellent offering Susan!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on October 26, 2006

This was poignant and in couplets too, but goodness gracious ... how your heart has blossomed and matured Belle.

Oodles of Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Randall Barfield

Reviewed on October 26, 2006

Nice. I'll never stop commenting on your rhythm/music. Keep flowing. I hope to read some of your articles this weekend. I've noticed some of the titles. Cheers

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 26, 2006

Quite powerful, Susan.

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on October 26, 2006

Susan

This ageless classic has stood the test of time..

Shalom

Peter

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on October 26, 2006

I do love rhyming couplets, a beautiful poem Susan.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 26, 2006

Stunning write that captures the very soul of the authour in it's words and sharp images of pain, yearning and love.

Fee

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

exceptionally conceived couplets ...

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

Tis a beautiful piece
you posted here ....Susan
thanks for sharing

Love & Peace
William

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

Exquisite love poem Sis! This takes me to another dimension, Such vivid poignancy...Superb work!

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

So full of beautiful lines, this is a poem to remember. Victor

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

Nothing dusty about this one, cobwebs or not. when you can relate as well as you do it never shall grow stale . . . You kick a**

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

I like the style. A beauty.

Reviewed by F William Broome

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

Don't ever let anyone try to convince you that the old way of writing love poems is passe. Writing like this will always be the ultimate in conveying emotion from one person to anotehr or others. You've penned an exceptional one here, Susan, and I congratuulate... times over!
- Bill

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

I relate and know this all too well in personal experience. It was elaquently stated Susan. Thanks for this treasure--

Love,
Dove

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

The contents of the poem are timeless.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

Susan,

Sometimes, it's worth it to resurrect old ghosts and clear the cobwebs. :) I enjoyed reading this one. Poignant, heartfelt verse, excellently penned.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

You wouldn't want to read my old ghosts *shudder*

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

What a joy, and I say, who cares if it's from the attic? Poetry is timeless, sweet friend! This poem is exceptional no matter how old.
Love,
CJ