Provacative Chance (poem) by Susan K. de Vegter on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on December 10, 2006

Will take a provacative chance anytime, anyplace, anywhere. Ready?

Ron

Reviewed on December 9, 2006

Chance is both wonderful and scary yet everything we endeavor is based upon it. And how provocative it can be. excellent depiction.
Pierre.

Reviewed by Randall Barfield

Reviewed on December 9, 2006

"provocative chance" is a very interesting pair as is "market for happenstance," which isn't a pair but is good. Calls for some thinking about... thanks a lot for sharing

Reviewed by Approximately Naive

Reviewed on December 9, 2006

with no market for happenstance

This line is quite apt for the consumerist spirit of the age that prevails. Everything, including ourselves from the moment we are born, is meat for the market. Thankfully, neither Keynes, Hayek nor Friedman could fit the hand of providence into an economic unit.
I believe that little of our lives is given over to chance if it were it would be morally and spiritually aimless.
Having said this, what chance exists can be very provocative one way or another.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on December 9, 2006

Image and verses complement one another most effectively to present a brilliant offering; thank you for sharing it, Susan. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on December 9, 2006

"Dazzling" was the word that came to mind when the gorgeous photo of the peacock popped up and there it was at the beginning of the 5th line. A good word for the image and an excellent word for the read.
Aberjhani

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on December 9, 2006

without taking chances the passion of spirit cannot evolve and display its finest colors of being ...

succinct verse interwoven into this profound display of insight ...

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on December 9, 2006

This is sensational, Susan -- your rhyme and meter are flawless and the photo above is dynamite! An excellent poem with a heartfelt message.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on December 9, 2006

An utter beauty Susan...Wow!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on December 8, 2006

Sparkles with the heart and passion you have poured into this one, I love it and think it is one of your finer works. Sweet....

FEe

Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)

Reviewed on December 8, 2006

Well done.Hot
Nice poem

Michael

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on December 8, 2006

our mystical style of passion
is ten times hotter than we believe

That has got to be very hot - and I love that picture, Susan.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on December 8, 2006

Enchanting image Belle. I hear the creature saying: "Eat your heart out Las Vegas!" You also turn up the heat with this embracing write.

Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on December 8, 2006

Wow

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on December 8, 2006

Lovely, pic and poem.

Reviewed by F William Broome

Reviewed on December 8, 2006

It appears, Susan, that I am first to review. This is a rare glimpse of how we go about it, and the intensity of the thing. It is well done, and clever.

I like every word... except these, which would bother me if I were much younger: "await to be concieved" - Now, that's a bit graphic... doncha think?

- Bill