"I saw an angel in a stone and I chipped away to set her free."
Michelangelo
Here it is the dawn of beginnings
The real and depth of super births
The Nova of the blast resounds
Building, filling more it's worth
Life is living as hearts merge beating
Infantile rejuvenation, giving
Meaning more than thoughts trespassing
Miracles born without impressions
Illusions dreams, gauze of fitting
Shadows silhouettes emissions
Not alone this pair awakens
Groggy dizzy
Walking giddy
Circle round about and shaking
Fuzzy dreams tremble, making
Hearts on fire with flames soaring
Fullness illuminating wonders
Thoughts alive while passion thunders
No old cliches' or verb's intention
True love defies definition
It's a Nova's birth
A Comet's tail
Vesuvious power
Kohotecks trail
It's freeer than an infant's breath
It's an abyss with a softer depth
It's a heaven born in a smile
The shine that glows inside of miles
It's a wordsmith's gifted angle
Speaks in voices, encored angels
It's fullness living in colored demensions
It's love above for all intended
Description has no dress for this
However birthed it's a perfect fit.
TOTALLY ADORE that Michelangelo quote for a start... ain't we ALLLLLLLL that, after all? Fantastic BIG BANG of love's inception and conception here, Susan, with all the whizz-bang to carry it forward to it projected real end. The coming together of two matched souls, as you describe, just IS the perfect fit... A perfect Bo Derek 10 for this one. Bless you and thank you, Kate xx
You've described another world here -- magestic, powerful, and at once astounding. Oh to be able to explore the wonder of it all. A pleasure to read, Susan.
Love,
CJ
You have the insight of a babe in the womb wondering about all the beauty and wonder they will see when they are born.
Reviewed by Debra Harmes-Kurth (Reader)
Reviewed on January 29, 2007
Susan the wonder and beauty you hold dear shows in this poem.
debra
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on January 29, 2007
I have seen comets but without a telescope. On TV I've seen Vessuvious spout out lava. Frightening. but I think a comet is more dangerous and more spectacular. Hopefully any comet will keep its distance. Victor
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 29, 2007
Oftentime I wonder, is it only man who enjoys creations bounty and can express it to another being, who has a different paradigm...
Fabulous star gazing insight with the sharpness of a big screen TV offering a glimpse into the beginning of yesterday. Wonderful write dear Susan, wonderful.
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CJ
and back.
"Dawn of Beginnings"
Perfect ending.
DWB
very visual.........
loved it
applause
pax A
debra
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