Thanks to my friend Ty Wilson for the artistic pen and ink.
Susan
I've roughed it long enough now
My loneliness is over
I'm acting like a silly child
I run and smell the clover
I know that clouds are beautiful
I've soared among a few
I see another world right now
And all because of you
The vastness of a cobalt sky
While lover's fly above
Its wonderful to spread your heart
When you put a face on love.
Its a whole new world of butterflies
Dancing all inside
It's giggles under cotton sheets
A slow erotic ride
It's smiles so wide they break your face
Its waiting for that shove
Then gently giving back a push
When you put a face on love.
Colors seem to be enhanced
Fingers feel like satin
When you strive for eloquence
It all comes out in Latin
Emotions all seem like nerves
They handstand end to end
You tear at even happiness
When rhythms start to spin
Your eyes shoot sparks like bullets
Just like lightning bugs
Each day is a new flower
When you put a face on love.
"The vastness of a cobalt sky,while lovers fly above,It's wonderful to spread your heart when you put a face on love" This whole poem is so beautiful. Thank you, Love, Pierre.
The whole process (to me) is like a pendulum - back and forth it goes - sometimes good, sometimes bad, but always keeping our attention. If I had to put a face on human love it would have to be half light/half shadow and all the shades inbetween. Your insights into love are always refreshing and unique. Blessings to you ...
Richard
Ahhh Susan, sounds like you have felt the love bug once more nibbling at your foliage (oops, that didn't sound just right did it?), anyway a lovely write by a lovely lady of romance.
hugs
Fee
Reviewed by Tiana Jett (Reader)
Reviewed on July 8, 2007
Beautifully written ... Love looks beautiful on you, Susan ... Love - Tee
Susan, you've out done yourself with this one.
It has your vintage stamped all over it.
Beautiful and lovely words that are reflected in
"Love's Face"
Is a new photograph about to take place?
DWB
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on July 7, 2007
Excellent love poem, so well refined. It has rhythm and rhyme to perfection. Victor
What happens during those moments -Every aspect of your existence can be felt - All the desires accumulated - Another one is added - The count is endless - Bringing forward your entire essence to another - Everything you have ever been - {beautiful} <>Ted
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Taylor
Ron
The whole process (to me) is like a pendulum - back and forth it goes - sometimes good, sometimes bad, but always keeping our attention. If I had to put a face on human love it would have to be half light/half shadow and all the shades inbetween. Your insights into love are always refreshing and unique. Blessings to you ...
Richard
hugs
Fee
It has your vintage stamped all over it.
Beautiful and lovely words that are reflected in
"Love's Face"
Is a new photograph about to take place?
DWB
Allen
Love,
Eileen
Masterful write...
I Could'nt say "one Of your best"
'Cuz, you're the best
Peace be with you
William
Love & Peace
What happens during those moments -Every aspect of your existence can be felt - All the desires accumulated - Another one is added - The count is endless - Bringing forward your entire essence to another - Everything you have ever been - {beautiful} <>Ted
Dancing all inside
It's giggles under cotton sheets
A slow erotic ride"
Love is so grand.......spins our world indeed..... Beautiful poetry my friend!
Peace,
Bill