Listen...hear it? (poem) by Susan K. de Vegter on AuthorsDen

Listen...hear it?
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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It's Your Heart

You fall in love and then go wild The days are playgrounds for your child The one in you beginning anew When passions glow and hearts do too. Loves a playground, til-a-whirl Blonde long bangs , uplifted curls Smiles so big with love's new grin Overbites..there it goes again Listen...hear it? It's your heart Beating with this brand new spark Yanking nods from passing crowds Nodding silence, screams aloud Everybody notices you The girl whose eyes are bluer...blue Whose lips are shine...rebound Whose feet walk feet above the ground Listen...hear it beating near The silence filling just in there There where hearts fill with sparks On the blind side of the heart You know the side where pain hangs out Where scars are fitted upon scars There where no one can come in Just there where love can't begin Its where love goes to forget There where this love shouldn't fit Right there where darkness dwells Just hollow echoes in this hell Where love burrowed into this scar There where it opened and came ajarred Then gave enough to open more Then changed the pains that it bore This playground shines and gives more tears Of happiness instead of fears It seems renewed from fated fate It fills with love, never hate It takes a cloud of deepest grays Then turns it into bluer days It takes the blackness of the dark It changes into a red full heart Love takes a woman, gifted smile Returns to her the inside child The greatest frown comes ajar When love licks a kiss from this scar Then love produces love's own spark Donates new sight to this blinded heart Its takes the scars from created pain Then lets the heart love again She opens up her heart to gain The pulse who comes to her again This one who sneaks in his own spark Into the blind side of her heart. � 2003 Susan Kathryn de Vegter Susan welcomes your comments!

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on September 23, 2007

A song of love and hurt. Sounds a lot like love..

Ron

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

crazy thing, love-good write-made me smile remembering

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on September 22, 2007

Then gave enough to open more
Then changed the pains that it bore
I always cherish your words that are sometimes so relevant.

Walt

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Yes I can hear it, feel it and see it with these vivid word pictures of the cycles of love as it seems to go round and round like a merry go round. Lovely work Susan.

Fee

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Beautifully written piece Susan
Thanks for sharing
Love & Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by John Leko

written with much beauty...their is belief in the blind side of the heart...discovered and rediscovered.
John

Reviewed by Emily Tarantino

I have chills! this is absolutly beautiful! It's a perfect representation of love.
Thank you.
Em

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Ya gotta watch that blind side, it'll get ya every time . . . This done was done so artfully and dramatic, Susan, it reads almost like a classic, something that it very well may be destined for in future generations . . . Gotta love it . . .

Reviewed by Ted Bossis

In depth emotional sponge saturated <>love& goodness * Ted