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Once Upon a Fairy Tale
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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Fun poetry gives me a lot of smiles in my insides. I like writing and playing with words sometimes. This was written after I watched Camelot on the television. It must have been hot and a world of confusion when it came to satisfying lust in those days.

By Susan Kathryn de Vegter
copyright 2006

Once upon a Fairy Tale when maidens with long hair
Let it down for valor's fool who didn't really care
For what his friends would dare to think or even less to prove
As mindless notions quickly came as boldly he'd persue
The maiden with the moonlit eyes and stars made for this rube
With limpid glands that spoke in tights from every tuck and groove
She'd purr to him in moments while his fingers, scarred and bent
Grasped the edge of sanity while his passions proudly spent
Themselves upon the ivyed walls as per custom for the male
To leave a trail of silver prints... liken to the snail
Footprints of a love made quick and gushed upon the bricks
For mindless lust for fools who dared and maidens with their tricks
To woo the suitor's hand with wiles that caused so much dismay
With love that spent itself up high with lust just for a day
Gone as she mocked his play and turned his smile to tears
Back in the days of valor with laughter from these dear
Women of the Roundtable ... their Camelots of Haste
And playing men in those days when love was gone to waste
When men were fooled into this game...when passion laughed and dealt
The playful tease of those who wore
a rusted chastity belt.





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 Reviews of "Once Upon a Fairy Tale"
Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on January 7, 2008
I refrain from all that goes through the mind at first...lol...I could not imagine such a thing but I do know men who act .......leave it there...tell you later. WD 40 doesn't unlock those things. Good write, Susan

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on January 7, 2008
Ditto J Allen, WD-40 works wonders.

Walt

Reviewed by Pierre Ortega
Reviewed on January 6, 2008
Now that you've made me think about this, you got me wondering how
happy the locksmiths must have been.

Love, Pierre

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 6, 2008
love the fun of this

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on January 6, 2008
"rusted chastity belt."

WD-40?....Just kidding Susan, I couldn't help myself...this was a very splending write...I liked the playfulness in it.

PS: I checked out the park you mentioned in Fla. It sounds wonderful...thanks...maybe someday.

Allen

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 6, 2008
Susan you painted a vivid picture with images that took me there and had me finding pleasure in the experience! Superb prose!

Love,
ET

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on January 6, 2008
Nice Susan, you certainly paint the picture well...and without seeing the moving we can view from within your poem...

nice...

Reviewed on January 6, 2008
A romp on the wild side, Susan, creatively penned! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 6, 2008
It certainly does make one think when you look back to that day and age, where lice even in the noble class was abundant with lack of bathing etc. So I guess it just goes to prove that no matter what when the urge strikes the needs must be fulfilled...maybe a rusty belt was a good thing...easier to break open. lol
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on January 6, 2008
How the world spins itself~Grasping the edge of sanity.~.evol_Ted

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 6, 2008
Ditto George on this one...........thank goodness we don't have to wear those gowns anymore.........that alone musta been a job to keep the mind to the business of gettinh 'there'

Love Tinka

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on January 6, 2008
...and the women of the table went around...and around...and around.
well penned Susan...
John

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on January 6, 2008
Lust finds a way to satisfy itself.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 6, 2008
"Camelots of Haste" . . . "Footprints of a love made quick and gushed upon the bricks" . . . "Gone as she mocked his play and turned his smile to tears" . . . Hahahaha!!! Even with the chasity belt the men were . . . er . . . quick draw McGraw's . . . Gotta love it . . .


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