Fun poetry gives me a lot of smiles in my insides. I like writing and playing with words sometimes. This was written after I watched Camelot on the television. It must have been hot and a world of confusion when it came to satisfying lust in those days.
By Susan Kathryn de Vegter
copyright 2006
Once upon a Fairy Tale when maidens with long hair
Let it down for valor's fool who didn't really care
For what his friends would dare to think or even less to prove
As mindless notions quickly came as boldly he'd persue
The maiden with the moonlit eyes and stars made for this rube
With limpid glands that spoke in tights from every tuck and groove
She'd purr to him in moments while his fingers, scarred and bent
Grasped the edge of sanity while his passions proudly spent
Themselves upon the ivyed walls as per custom for the male
To leave a trail of silver prints... liken to the snail
Footprints of a love made quick and gushed upon the bricks
For mindless lust for fools who dared and maidens with their tricks
To woo the suitor's hand with wiles that caused so much dismay
With love that spent itself up high with lust just for a day
Gone as she mocked his play and turned his smile to tears
Back in the days of valor with laughter from these dear
Women of the Roundtable ... their Camelots of Haste
And playing men in those days when love was gone to waste
When men were fooled into this game...when passion laughed and dealt
The playful tease of those who wore
a rusted chastity belt.
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Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on January 7, 2008
I refrain from all that goes through the mind at first...lol...I could not imagine such a thing but I do know men who act .......leave it there...tell you later. WD 40 doesn't unlock those things. Good write, Susan
It certainly does make one think when you look back to that day and age, where lice even in the noble class was abundant with lack of bathing etc. So I guess it just goes to prove that no matter what when the urge strikes the needs must be fulfilled...maybe a rusty belt was a good thing...easier to break open. lol
hugs
Fee
Ditto George on this one...........thank goodness we don't have to wear those gowns anymore.........that alone musta been a job to keep the mind to the business of gettinh 'there'
"Camelots of Haste" . . . "Footprints of a love made quick and gushed upon the bricks" . . . "Gone as she mocked his play and turned his smile to tears" . . . Hahahaha!!! Even with the chasity belt the men were . . . er . . . quick draw McGraw's . . . Gotta love it . . .
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Walt
happy the locksmiths must have been.
Love, Pierre
WD-40?....Just kidding Susan, I couldn't help myself...this was a very splending write...I liked the playfulness in it.
PS: I checked out the park you mentioned in Fla. It sounds wonderful...thanks...maybe someday.
Allen
Love,
ET
nice...
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
hugs
Fee
Love Tinka
well penned Susan...
John