What way can you manifest destiny?
What reason would you have?
Is falling off a cliff as good
As jack-knifing into clouds?
Can the answer help to keep the pains
Away...for all the same
Love that comes along with aches
...the never ending rains
The growth of hearts that once were faint
The lonely searching soul
Always looking not to find
That spirited bright rainbow
Imagine giving in...then what the future brings
The many smiles and comfort there
The never ending dreams
To choose the other...just lie still
Never step a step
Stagnate air, frozen smile
Hollow with no depth
Manifest and thrive...give in
Search the days for worth
Look for eyes that have your spark
Shine...just beam...go forth
Understand impeccably
The you that needs just now
Come on up and celebrate
Help your heart to bow
Imagine what your life will be
With a likeness...hand in hand
Dream your dreams
Fantasize
The hour glass of sands
Take hold of fortunes smiling back
Imagine all your dreams
Take this chance...enforce your spirit
Imagine what it'll bring.
...you give us reason to dream in your verse...as we risk dangling from the end of your pen...without fear...willing to listen to your thoughts...
excellent Susan...
John
Imagine what it will bring......
You may say I'm a dreamer,
but I'm not the only one.
Arise, gird your loins, and prepare for the battle against mediocrity.
Walt
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 12, 2008
It would be difficult to put it anny better than Eileen has. Your work is consistently optimistic and hopeful, with amour its central theme . . . Negativity dares not show its ugly head in most of your work . . . That tells me much about the poet . . .
Glorious imagining Susan! Your passion for life and your spirit sparks us to be proactive and not just sit back waiting for it to happen, but to go out amd make it happen! Right on Sis! You give us the hope to imagine!My kind of action!
Outstanding write Susan
I can't imagine too much
just barely make it it one day at a time
but i trult enjoyed your write as always
love & peace be with you
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Ron
excellent Susan...
John
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Fee
nice work, Susan...
Gloriously inspiring/inspired writing, carpe diem, seize the day! Well done!! My new favorite of yours.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
You may say I'm a dreamer,
but I'm not the only one.
Arise, gird your loins, and prepare for the battle against mediocrity.
Walt
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Love,
ET
Oh I do.
Love, Pierre
Ron
I can't imagine too much
just barely make it it one day at a time
but i trult enjoyed your write as always
love & peace be with you
William