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Let's Say....
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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Let's say that things are different
Coming in the New Year
Let's say that life will blossom
Without all those tears
And what if war is obsolete
Will anybody care
Will harmony complete the mood
Of old warriors who always dared
Just what if there's a miracle
Complete with happy hearts
Full stomachs for those who're starving
What a GREAT way to start
Thinking on a full stomach
New life in tired old eyes
No longer words like "strife"
Or "hatred" and those "Lies"
Just what if this year is different
With everyone intune
It would justify the misery
It took to frown our moon
It's not that all far-fetched
It can happen all the same
If each and very nation
Denounced their own war games.


copyright 2008
Susan Kathryn de Vegter

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 Reviews of "Let's Say...."
Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)
Reviewed on August 13, 2009
2008-are u still writing your lovely poetry?

Reviewed by M Flack
Reviewed on March 18, 2009
Well said indeed.
All it takes is one heart changed to change the tide of hearts.
And a wave of love can wash away the desert of pain.
Thanks for sharing...

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on July 23, 2008
bravo, for the content and style Sue! pax a

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on July 6, 2008
Nice work Susan, our hopes for a world of peace and love sits within our dreams and yet it is as simple as your poem...to give up the need for greed and power and just live in harmony...


oh to dream and hope...

nice Susan...

Art Sun...

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on July 5, 2008
...without rhyme or reason...your words would say nothing...but with rhyme and reason...your words say everything...yes they do.
wonderful write Susan...and my hopes...

John


Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
Reviewed on July 3, 2008
'Let's Say'. . . .
The Commanders called for war
But no soldiers came. . . .
Things wouldn't be the same
GREAT poem
Doug

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 2, 2008
Well said. Wouldn't it be wonderful if it were heeded?

Ron

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on July 1, 2008
Very hopeful and uplifting Susan, I miss you, what's up?
I wish you well, and peace, love, and lightness,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on July 1, 2008
I love your mentality and how you think.There isn't a day that goes by that I think about those things you express.We need to keep the good message alive and forever.I love your poem.take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on July 1, 2008
yes, what if--i would love to find out-wonderful write

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on July 1, 2008
"WAR!!! Good God - huh - What is it good for? Absolutely NUTHIN!" ... And so we have been singing almost since the heady days of post-war 1950s... And, along with first world affluence, war strategies and hunger for global power has continued to tread underfoot the heartbeat of the common man. Autocracies seem intent on suppressing their own peoples... democracies seem hellbent on suppressing everyone else's. But I still believe the dream and the voices of MLK and John Lennon are still as strong. It seems to be getting our democratically voted representatives to do what the people who put them into power want that's the problem. I greatly admire your tenacity in continue to shout it from the rooftops: GIVE PEACE A CHANCE! Great bolstering rhythm to this one, which gets us all into step... It's indeed a long, long way to Tipperary... Hope you're well. Kate xx

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 1, 2008
So true Dearest Susan but alas I fear it will not be in our time but if we keep the message alive and spread it to our children and grandchildren maybe someday your dream will become reality.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on July 1, 2008
Reading your poem makes me realize that very few people seem to have and to defend such essential ideals today. It all seems quite natural to me and yet... what happened to this healthy way of thinking?

This is lovely Susan.

Axilea

Reviewed on July 1, 2008

Sublime ontologic social thoughts to prevent the teleologic FATE of hamans... "Let's Say...." sings to fraternity and Justice.

In respect and admiration,

Andre Emmanuel bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on July 1, 2008
Ah, Susan, a nineteen sixtish mantra revived . . . Reality is much different . . . Human beings will ALWAYS be resentful of something someone else has or smarting at some supposed or real insult or knowing that "their" way of running countries is far better than others, therefore they must impose their brand of humanity on them . . . Beautiful sentiments you have peen here . . . I have done the same a time or two . . . But I know better . . . "Wars and rumors of war" . . .

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on July 1, 2008
Susan! That is one of the nicest poems I've read in a long time. What a sweet wish and so well said and done. Great write. God bless.


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