Negotiated silence in this busy world
Straining to reap the dream
From constant pining and this aching swirl
In this vast valley of yearning
In my endless quest for time
To spend each eager moment
In his embrace...entertwined
Leaning into this daydream
Preparing for the sun
To warm this ache I have for him
In anquished desire my body hums
As heated rays kiss my flesh
When moisture emerges where
Each passion point of my desire
For him explodes and burns
His growth emerges boundless
My dreams bring him around
To being cloaked within my soul
To sculpting me complete ... his whole
Silence for these moments
Gripped in love's array
Playing with each wish for him
To dwell within my everyday.
Susan, I can feel this so deeply,knowing every nuance of feeling you have since it seems women are always yearning for love since time robs us of it too often...Superb poem!
I've just posted of "poetic humming" but the source is probably a subliminal kin of your own here! Or rather, although I speak of the transcendental academic, when it all comes down to it, the intellectual response is primarily driven by our deepest needs and desires... I much prefer your hum to mine anyday! You have soldered body, mind and spirit into the the essence of creative beauty that is an expression of the shelter of love most wonderfully, Susan. xx
A walk down the heart's bridge with a companion, Anguished Desire is pensive in both thought and image. To document art as clearly as you have done here, Susan, requires the people to compliment one another in contrast and muteness, where the eyes and the soul meet in silence and dream...good work and soft background fading into the context of feeling...it's real.
Using Calgary as a backdrop the author satirizes the self-serving nature of the public as it continues to fatten itself, not only physically, but egotistically as well.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
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Ron
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
When real love touches us, it is certainly
an undeniable experience. Beautiful!
Luv r
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Love,
Sage