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Justifying Moments
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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Yep...that would be me...years ago! The other half of this picture is the poem.


It's raining here off and on so I'm going through old writes. This one is about a photograph I found and I'd torn off the part of a person I'd chosen to condition. Although we play games like this to forget the past... we always remember the visual.

SKdeV


Mirror images and light
Refractions of a minute
Dated portrait inset
Pains are merely hinted
Fine line of a feather
Brushed with artists hand
Justifying moments
Hourglass in sands
Shadows in a mirror
Etched in time's array
Severed image photo
Seclusion in the grays
This woman like a rose in time
Rosy cheeks a glow
Breathing in this moment
Another breath she glows
Aloof and charming angel
Rose of Cardinal red
Visions of a dreamer
Love is tender fed
Careful is this image
Always looking back
Intelligence of wisdom
With mirror imaged tact.

Author: Susan Kathyrn de Vegter
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 Reviews of "Justifying Moments"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 15, 2010
As you wrote, this certainly is one-sided.

Ron

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on February 15, 2010
And you captured the story behind the photograph very well, Susan. Great job.

Anna

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on February 14, 2010
you have penned this with such photographic precision it's as if the negative was still developping in the mind's eye, separating the white from the black to eradicate the grainy greys. Sometimes in relationships we have to do this - separate ourselves out to gain a proper perspective of self and other (particularly when a form of co-mingling has become confused). Sometimes it's just more healthy this way and enables us to preserve the image of "all that was good before it turned bad". Beautiful and holistic justifications here, Susan. xx

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on February 14, 2010
"Another breath she glows
Aloof and charming angel
Rose of Cardinal red
Visions of a dreamer"

outstanding lines to a wonderful poem ...

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on February 13, 2010
Love the flow of this Susan. Wonderful work. Beautifully crafted.

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on February 13, 2010
Excellent write Susan
Enjoyed reading your wonderful Thoughts
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on February 13, 2010
Opp's I miss-read, "nose of cardinal red"
Keep looking forward, the best is ahead.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on February 13, 2010
a lovely write-intraspective

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 13, 2010
Susan, and a beauty you were and a beauty you are / I have a photo or two in similar vein / I shudder when I bring it out to look upon it again / Sometimes the ghosts are better hidden / Beautiful words that hint, rather than accuse . . .

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on February 12, 2010
An honest look at severing ties...it's times like these when we look back and can see our growth. The years pass and our wisdom flows from experience...justification like sands through the hour glass allot us a moment in time, Susan...and so are the days of our lives...be well.

Love,
Sage


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