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Feather
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Augh...To be a Feather

I feel like I'm a feather dancing in the air
My tresses flow behind me as if they have no care
I free-fall through the centuries, the aged times of old
I tremble with the breezes breath I fancy feeling bold
I tickle the children's' nose I flow around their ears
I buzz atop a horses back, I dangle within fears
I travel in dimensions and flow among the kings
I even scrape the golden crowns of Camelot and queens
I fall from the turrets...thrown from a princess high
Then settle in the moat below and float among her sighs
I once again redeem my place in breezes pick-me-up
I flow much further as I light to settle on a pup
The flight just then is tickled with tongues that seek me out
As children of Sir Arthur laugh...pick me up and shout
"Look at thee Mum they shout"..."We found this pretty feather"
"Come rejoice and sing aloud"...as songs of children gather
Just to travel and be free of all that's cumbersome
Brings the dreams to focus at all I've gone and done
I merely want to float away...sometimes it's just a dream
Its out-of-focus wishes in life's grander scheme of things.

© 2003 Susan K. Rowse

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 Reviews of "Feather"
Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick
Reviewed on January 11, 2004
wonderful!

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on November 29, 2003
Susan, this is an extraordinary pice you've penned. So much depth

Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
Reviewed on November 24, 2003
Hi Susan, I thought this displayed a feathery lightness, though no pun intended on the title, ad taught the elaborateness of light things, as opposed to heavy, this line especially made me thrill -

Then settle in the moat below and float among her sighs

Al

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on November 24, 2003
As light as air.....Susan, just lovely.....ty, Dani

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 24, 2003
Very beautiful imagery great concept you penned here Susan!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on November 24, 2003
Susan, love the easy going feel that your poem portrays.

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on November 23, 2003
A wonderful write .....Susan
love the imagery
and your excellent work.

William

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 23, 2003
Very beautiful imagery great concept, a pleasure to read Susan!

Reviewed on November 23, 2003
This was wonderful, I enjoyed this so much!

Reindeer

Reviewed on November 23, 2003
Profound, with much depth. I loved it. Thanks.

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on November 23, 2003
I love this Susan! What a neat idea put to beautiful rhyme!

Jack

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on November 23, 2003
Great write, the levity in this is thumbs up...enjoyed.
Allen


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