I feel like I'm a feather dancing in the air
My tresses flow behind me as if they have no care
I free-fall through the centuries, the aged times of old
I tremble with the breezes breath I fancy feeling bold
I tickle the children's' nose I flow around their ears
I buzz atop a horses back, I dangle within fears
I travel in dimensions and flow among the kings
I even scrape the golden crowns of Camelot and queens
I fall from the turrets...thrown from a princess high
Then settle in the moat below and float among her sighs
I once again redeem my place in breezes pick-me-up
I flow much further as I light to settle on a pup
The flight just then is tickled with tongues that seek me out
As children of Sir Arthur laugh...pick me up and shout
"Look at thee Mum they shout"..."We found this pretty feather"
"Come rejoice and sing aloud"...as songs of children gather
Just to travel and be free of all that's cumbersome
Brings the dreams to focus at all I've gone and done
I merely want to float away...sometimes it's just a dream
Its out-of-focus wishes in life's grander scheme of things.
Susan, this is an extraordinary pice you've penned. So much depth
Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
Reviewed on November 24, 2003
Hi Susan, I thought this displayed a feathery lightness, though no pun intended on the title, ad taught the elaborateness of light things, as opposed to heavy, this line especially made me thrill -
Then settle in the moat below and float among her sighs
Al
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on November 24, 2003
As light as air.....Susan, just lovely.....ty, Dani
Early Works is an exhaustive compilation of the first decade of the poems and stories of Z.B.McClure. Included are family photos, rare personal photos, photos of 1st draft manuscripts of many of his early poems. Also some biography and memoir materia
Then settle in the moat below and float among her sighs
Al
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love the imagery
and your excellent work.
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Allen