If But To Dream (poem) by Susan K. de Vegter on AuthorsDen

If But To Dream
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Fantasy, dreaming and wishing...it's a part of growing and also part of believing. For me I welcome the scope of dreams in a huge canvas of colors.I know of this other side. Susan
Soaring on wings of the endless dawn Skimming the earth...only as pawns Before we know it... In no time at all We'll deserve what we have With no where to fall Let favorite illusions be as they must Fleeting they come As going they rust We've visited before Devored it all Savored the taste and just had a ball Together as friends Escorting our muse Shared ageless beauty and boundless reviews Dearest of hearts and ageless ambitions Hold me quick...fast Keep tight this transition Tomorrow will come and in all our haste The sunset will blossom with no after taste Then just as the midnight collapses around us Our daydreams balloon ... Our tears become rusted Our hearts will regain what beat it remembers As dawn brings new drama to dying old embers And daylight reminds us that living is pain Until nighttime commits us to travel again.

Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick

Reviewed on February 13, 2004

:-)

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on February 8, 2004

Wonderful comment on dreams.

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)

Susan, your poetry is getting better with each write. Excellent

Reviewed by Justareader Offinework (Reader)

Reviewed on February 6, 2004

Your verse in this beautiful piece are so vivid I can envision this on canvas.

Peace and Love
Tony

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Hi susan...havent seen you in awhile...this is fantastic writing...love every line...has a wonderful flow to it...and I love the essence of the poem...floria

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

This was beautiful Susan, very lovely,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Dreams aregood friends at times Susan!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on February 5, 2004

Soaring on wings of the endless dawn
Skimming the earth...only as pawns
Before we know it...
In no time at all
We'll deserve what we have
With no where to fall

Susan....this is wonderful write...I am glad to have you back...so hows ure work going on...congrats for your new job...cheers...love n luck...BHUWAN

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

this write made me wonder and want...
very nice imagery too

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Dreams can lead to wonderful creativity. This is certainly one such example. Nice write.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Wake up calls is in, up at five. Good read.