Love's Own Canvas (poem) by Susan K. de Vegter on AuthorsDen

Love's Own Canvas
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Love's Own Canvas ~~O~~O~~O~~ I lie among tasseled brocade Enhale the passion love has made I feel your form break through the air Then suddenly... you're standing here I sense your shadow then grab my brush... I draw a line of love for us The form with sabled bristles flow Is tribute to the love that grows The next smooth stroke is your eyes They appear half closed, My passion flies Just then a flow of fuller lips... That bend to collect these kissing sips Bristled golden moonlit night... Shines upon our passion bright Added blues to softer shades, Deep within where pleasures' made Hidden down with treasures deep Awaiting plunges ... fluids creep Deep within a sweep of red Nerves launch flesh to breath instead Keep the rhythm from hearts partaking Then color hunger as it wakens Oranges and magentas flowing Into fruity peaches glowing Flesh tones fading turning rosy Splash of mountain laurel poseys Dandelion, yellowed hair... Titanium porcelain skin so rare Kissing dots upon each ripple Hardened berries of crimson nipples Billowed melons flesh so sweet Tender juices of a lover's feast Legs of salmon-colored skin Opening where love begins Freckled, seinna spots ... Laced about with passion, hot The absolute and firm request Form eager urges ... better ... best Legs entwined once they merge Licking smells and arching curves Lushess flames that beg "Come Near!" Gently passion speaks, "I'm Here! Opened vees that hug your line Splashed on juices... From bold to fine Sketched with colors in this fashion Glowing canvas of my sabled passion. ~~O~~O~~O~~ Author ~ Susan K. Rowse (c) copyright, 2004 (all rights reserved) ~~O~~O~~O~~

Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick

Reviewed on March 5, 2004

lovely

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on February 16, 2004

That's a fine mess you've painted us into. Superbly stroked with the colours of the rainbow.

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)

Reviewed on February 15, 2004

Terrific write Susan. A true romantic

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on February 14, 2004

THIS...took my breath away. Powerful sensuality

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

You Romantic You!!

Happy Valentines Day!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

I think you burned a hole in the canvas with
this one, Susan....hee hee. What a painting!
I'm going to have to take another look inside
my box of oils. I think I missed something.

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Wow... sweet, hot, romantic... beautiful!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 13, 2004

Susan! A sensual delight done in shades of class and beauty! Brava!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

WOW very sensual, great hues, though trust the bloke in pic to be leaving before she wakes:))