It's a great emotional high to be at this threshold of my life.
SKR*
Am I here to be his tutor In our world or afterlife? With all the greatest passion As a dear friend or a wife? Perhaps be just his buddy Walking down some graveled path I need and want this closeness And his precense that I've lacked. Does it matter how I need him For it's been a long, long time Since faith and love came calling Or passions entertwined? Will it come as nubile fumblings At some technicolor show Or will it bounce from wall-to-wall As our passions overflow? I know that I can feel him Just as he's feeling me I will dance with his desires that night Chase the comets spirit free "I will, I know...I will", I say Reach out a little more Then blossom as his flower With this new love to explore.
Your poem is full of love and longing but they all are! I have never read a poem with the sincerity and simplicity of the written word as you have written and wrote here. Your words enchanting and majestic and your prose is melodic. You have so much love inside it jumps out in your writing and I'm sure that your longing for oneness will soon come to be. Your ramblings are beautifully composed and compelling.
Cheers
your fan
Alain
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susan's in love! and doesn't it look so pretty on her. :)
lovely write--enjoyed! i wish you the best :)
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
An outstanding writing, a very pleasant read.
Peace
Tony
I will dance with his desires that night
Chase the comets spirit free
Cheers
your fan
Alain