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Empty This Gloom
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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Please, friends and my love...don't fret for me. This is a poem I wrote somewhere in the dark part of my life. It still needs to be shared. It is what help give me the full heart I have today.
Susan*



  Empty This Gloom 

by Susan K. Rowse
  
It would take more than all winds combined...
Tornadoes, hurricanes...all with a fierce whine... 
Still nothing could dry the tears hung out. 
For sadness engulfed inside, I shout! 
Why are you gone? Why not take me? 
Now I'm alone embraced in a sea... 
Of sadness, despair...pity this fool 
Terrified of being...just being...a tool 
Of lonliness now, no smiles to turn 
The corners up or a kiss to burn 
A tatoo of hope inside of these walls 
Empty this gloom...hollow these halls
As shadows of fog...broken with grays 
No light to shine...gone are the days
For hope that has flown with wings in a sling 
For ghosts are alone, love's kiss...a sting 

It bites to the bone ..

This pain never pales 

It soars with the moans ...

 In whispers ...it sails 

Future a question

Nothing to greet 

Lonely souls sigh...

Hearts miss a beat

Chins dripping salt...

Liquids in pounds 

Crying and streaming to pool on the ground 
For now you have vanished and I am alone
Flown with the wind...hearts turned to stone 
Tears of hot moisture, burning the flesh 
No tokens of love...left here to mesh. 
Some recall of happiness...Jesus this pain 
Marrying my tears...in torrents, it rains 
Waiting for grace...praying I cry 
Redeem all my tears and help them to dry. 
 
© 2004 edited version/by Susan K. Rowse 
          first published: 
Delphi Amatuer Poetry Journal 
 
 
 


 


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 Reviews of "Empty This Gloom"
Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)
Reviewed on February 29, 2004
Very cleverly written. Dark and yet hopeful.

Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick
Reviewed on February 21, 2004
well done

Reviewed by Justareader Offinework (Reader)
Reviewed on February 21, 2004
Beautifully written!


Peace
Tony



Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on February 21, 2004
You showed a state of mind here that we can all be glad is in your past. Great expression of despair and gloom. I presume you are having the same problems with the AD editor that I have. I can't consistently get single spacing. Drives me nuts. I went to HTML, but that's a pain too. Oh, well ...
Best regards,
Leland

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 21, 2004
Very heartfelt Susan!!

Glad it's in the past...hope you still okay !

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 20, 2004
Susan this is so gut-wrenching...it reaches to the depths and scars the tissues...Thanks for sharing. I'm so glad you came to terms with it and overcame the demons of despair!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on February 20, 2004
you express your sadness superbly ...

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on February 20, 2004
THANKS FOR SHARING YOUR THOUGHTS

LOVE AND PEACE
WILLIAM

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on February 20, 2004
God knows I can relate to this, Susan. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love, peace and strength to you. Regis


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