DISCLAIMER: This poem is intended for entertainment use only and resembles no part of the author's life.
if i can feel your breath massaging every nerve if i can feel your fingers still drawing to my curves, i know that this is honest i know you're intentions but baby, if i get hooked what will happen then? finding wounds in dark places but you go on healing. all the shyness subsides for now as we continue revealing. minding to our desires delving into consequence my mind slips back to the start; what was the pretense? deep within there is a quake and i feel soon erruption. with every taste of your laughter this desire will keep resumption. a canopy of privacy one, to know, i've never come all i know is we're alone. all we can do is run. i can feel your warmth wanting to come near. i can feel the tension, that blooms into fear. i can feel the unsureness as we enter our zone. i can feel the relief ...as we go into 'alone'.
Copyright Brittany Renée 2004 All rights reserved.
Oh SO incredibly beautiful! PLEASE, give us more of this type of depth of passion and incredible warmth! THIS is why I continue to have intense confidence and pride in you. Brava! -- Jeff
Wow, Brittany, this is great!! Love this opening verse:
"if i can feel your breath
massaging every nerve
if i can feel your fingers
still drawing to my curves,"
Very soothing in its gentle sensuality. :)
Reviewed by Craig Bateman (Reader)
Reviewed on April 5, 2004
Nicely Done Brittany,
Long time no speak. It is good to see your poetry again. "Blooms into fear" is very nice. And the last line is nice as well. The poem is nicely accessible for me.
Brittany, I don't get to comment as much as I'd like, but your poetry is wonderful, and I enjoy it regularly. This poem is to me, a song about passion, it's build up , it's bliss... very nice.. Jim
If you tend to believe romantic, passionate, masculine poetry is a thing of past eras, read "She Intrigues Me," and be swept away in the beautiful craft of a contemporary poet of love.
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God Bless
~Michelle~
"if i can feel your breath
massaging every nerve
if i can feel your fingers
still drawing to my curves,"
Very soothing in its gentle sensuality. :)
Long time no speak. It is good to see your poetry again. "Blooms into fear" is very nice. And the last line is nice as well. The poem is nicely accessible for me.
Peace to you.