Once love embeds in a soul; a life drastic changes are quite expected, but nothing could prepare you for how less your love is accepted.
Those whom cherish love are precious and should be rewarded; forgotten not because in love they, too, dwell. Your choice how much love may allot.
Choosing love is at first quite simple but for trouble you're more qualified. Hence the quitters when the going is tough. We are failures when we fail to abide.
Do not love expecting reception for in that thought you'll fall already bruised. You will see that love is a lifestyle and a path that is rarely ever used.
(c) BRH 2004
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Reviews of "Tough Love"
Reviewed by Eddie Arce (Reader)
Reviewed on August 30, 2004
Still writting great Brittany... you should see my latest work.
Keep up the fluidity
-Eddie
Like the use of semicolons and two word endings on the first and sixth lines. Good moral on the fourth line. The only draw back is perhaps assumption or ascertion of the reader's ideas. J.
Keep up the fluidity
-Eddie
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