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Enslaved
by Brittany Renée → (All Poetry by Brittany Renée)
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The dulcet lullaby whispered in my ear
warmly embraces me in distress,
and the warmth of his song on my skin
forgives me for what I confess.
Watching his eyes as they trace me
and listening to him sweetly serenade,
leaves me with no wonder of another.
He has become the reason I was made.
Midnight sky shadows his figure
and the moonlight melts on his skin,
but I can't tear my eyes from his.
He has become my hallowed sin.

Beauty surrounds us oustide and in
but he is a midnight masterpiece.
Everything I once feared, expunged,
as he waltzes me into peace.
Gently he whispers his song to me
pouring forth desires for time
and it is then I hear the angels sing
that this angel was meant to be mine.
His song is finished as dawn is wakened,
but its his kiss that has saved
my soul from numbing,
my heart from falling.
To sweet dreams I am enslaved.

Morning's light pries me awake
and I do so in longing bittersweetly.
Sweet dreams have given hope
that dreams are fulfilled completely.
So I wake in high hopes
and the bar won't lower, but I'm afraid
that no lucky lover will be a match!
To sweet dreams I am enslaved.

(c) BRH 2004

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 Reviews of "Enslaved"
Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Reviewed on September 24, 2004
Dear Brittany,

This is such a wonderfully sensual and romantic write. Sometimes when posting a review it is difficult to come up with words that exactly describe the way a poem makes one feel. I have been pondering this in relation to your poem for a few minutes because this poem is simply not your ordinary run-of-the-mill love poem. It has a delicacy to it, a fragrant nuance that lingers long after the last line has been read. An achievement. I applaud you.
Chanti

Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on September 24, 2004
INCREDIBLE! You, my dear, are maturing beautifully, in your poetic mastery! Brittany, glad to see you posting again. Oh, this poem is SO outstandingly beautiful! -- Jeff

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on September 24, 2004
oh my......you are great!
my highest compliment to you........
WISH I WROTE IT!!!
PAX..........A

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on September 24, 2004
A divine romantic , Brittany...
Flowing and undulating with grace and splendour...
Peter

Reviewed by J. Murphy
Reviewed on September 24, 2004
Yes, great rythm, especially like the second stanza as it ends so wonderfully. J.

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on September 24, 2004
Exquisitely sensual with the cadence of a lullaby, Brittany. A beauty. :)

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on September 24, 2004
Romance written into excellence
enjoyed much

William ....peace & love

Reviewed on September 24, 2004
Excellent write as always
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on September 24, 2004
to sweet dreams i am enslaved...even this old cynic sees the romance in your writing and enjoys it


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