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Blindness of Love
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Shadows from beneath my skin tormented by verbal vapors toxics dying to stay within. Can't do the devil any favors. Silver hearts turned to bronze pink lungs, from tar, evaporate. Mind weakened by lies and cons the soul slowly to disintegrate. Painful thoughts are memorized sandy eyes plead for death. Rhytmically pain is synchronized under each desperate breath. Feeling lost to recalled passion slowly unfolding and understanding the forbidden love turn to aggression. The black hole to catch my landing. Smell of poison, once sweet daisies, sun dies in the blindness of love. Giving this purity to only a, "Maybe." Will this pain stop at "Enough!"? (C) 2006 Brittany Renee

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Reviewed by J. Murphy

Reviewed on October 31, 2006

Like the flow of the first and fourth verses. J.

Reviewed by Angel God is Love

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

Wonderful work.
Hugs Angela

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on October 21, 2006

Oh ..this IS perfection..
Excellent write to say the least..
I like your style Brittany..

Vesna:)

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on September 28, 2006

A deep heart felt poem of lost love.. Don't ever give up! Some are lucky enough to find a better, deeper, abiding love.... M

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)

Reviewed on September 25, 2006

When Love is blind to faults, I believe it is a good thing. When Love is blind to all the Blessings of Love, then it suffocates the soul and this is not good. Love comes from within so we must first learn to love ourselves before we can truly love others. The light of the Creator lives within us all and is a light that's meant to be shared!

Very passionate writing Brittany.

Warm Regards,
Joseph

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on September 22, 2006

The pen often releases the pains of the heart. Strong pen

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on September 21, 2006

Such depth of pain oozes from this penn.
Brilliant metaphors too....

Reviewed by Brett Moore

Reviewed on September 21, 2006

"The black hole to catch my landing". I can't think of a better line to describe that kind of pain.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on September 21, 2006

It's great to read you again, Brittany Renée. I can relate very empathically with the sentiments expressed in this poem. Thank you for sharing it. Love, peace, and strength to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on September 21, 2006

Brittany,

You have been missed; welcome back, girl! So good to see you; you haven't lost your touch! BRAVA; very well penned! :)

(((HUGS))) and much love, your Texas friend, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on September 21, 2006

Wise and mature write, I love your timing of verses......
the emotional message is outstanding
(its part of life, unfortunately)
Good things to come I am sure in the future :)
keep writing.....you are an old soul
pax A
aka lady A

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on September 20, 2006

Glad to see you back Brittany, and this was another masterpiece from your pen, I enjoyed
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on September 20, 2006

Welcome back and with works like this you will be quite popular I have no doubt. This breathes with a poignancy that is both sad but wishful at the same time, well done Brittany.
Fee

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on September 20, 2006

Brittany

A deep and brooding love poem..
We have enough...when we call enough !
Welcome back to the Board..

Peter

Reviewed by Jeff Mason

Reviewed on September 20, 2006

Wonderfully written. Check that spelling of 'rhytmitically' ;-) Good to see you back. This was very deeply experienced. -- Jeff

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