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Tears of White
by Brittany Renée → (All Poetry by Brittany Renée)
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To put aside the world, I'm willing.
Elongated silence, you're killing.
When I cry at night, these tears of white
My heart bleeds out my soul.

Without a sign, I'm nothing.
Without a trace, you're something.
Bone breaking sighs, feeling like "die"
My lungs bleed tears of white.

Submitting my warmth, I desire.
Submitting your cold, you're higher.
Waiting to meet, claiming defeat
My stomach bleeds tears of white.

Calloused to me, have you yet?
Memories gone, how can you forget?
Left in the dark, I watch you depart
My eyes bleed tears of white.

 

 
 

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 Reviews of "Tears of White"
Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Reviewed on November 24, 2006
Painful...potent...and pure.

Reviewed by J. Murphy
Reviewed on October 31, 2006
Love how the lines halt in the first two and then gain momentum through the third and fourth. J.

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on September 28, 2006
A soul shattering poem Britnay. Well done.........M

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on September 27, 2006
A heartfelt piece
sad but i must say an excellent write


Love & Peace
William

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 27, 2006
Deep touching piece!!

Welcome back girl!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on September 27, 2006
Such a sad story. What a tender and vulnerable heart you exhibited here.

Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on September 25, 2006
Tears of White ... stars raining down from Heaven,
Tears of White ... snowflakes falling from the sky,
Tears of White ... milk flowing from mother's breast.

This poem is naked emotion, splashed upon the page.

Welcome back Brittany ... good to read you again!

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 25, 2006
very moving and well written ...

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 24, 2006
The end of a long love is difficult, spec if it was expected to last.
It's a difficult pain to explain and talk about.
Tearsof white salt sting.
Love lasts but a momment, but one never forgets.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 24, 2006
Tear of white are very symbolic, Brittany. You have written a soul-stirring poem. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on September 24, 2006
This is a unique writing style, like dark dripping, good stuff.

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on September 24, 2006
Time to dry those bleeding eyes, and move on with confidence and verve
in life

Peter

Reviewed on September 24, 2006
There's a lots of bleeding in this one...

A very emottional write!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o(


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