Oh, raw or not - this is phenomenal! You are becoming quite the seasoned poet. Keep writing from that wonderful heart of yours -- that is the only truth that matters. -- Jeff
I stumbled upon this quite by accident but am so glad I did. I am such a haphazard member of this site but I love coming in when I have the time to read the works of my fellow members. What a lovely eloquent write this is. It touched me so deeply.
Chanti
ah my friend...poetry, at least in this man's book,is much more about substance than form...This piece of yours is indeed poetry...raw, jagged emotion, anguish, pain...a soul cry in which can be seen...every so slightly, a glimmer of hope.
Brittany, you paint such a scene...the despair of a human crushed and reaching out in need of caring and love and trust...but with so many questions woven into the personality of the one she reaaches out to. So nice to see your work again.
Love, Taylor
Stunning write for sure from one so young but wise in feelings and how to express them. This write strikes all the right chords and the reader can feel the pain and uncertatinty of the writers heart. She cries for confirmation and reassurance and it is a legitamate cry for help. Very well done Brittany and welcome back.
This book represents a thirty-day period of my poetry journal. Each poem addresses
the dominant thoughts occupying my mind during the early morning hours of a given
day.
Early Works is an exhaustive compilation of the first decade of the poems and stories of Z.B.McClure. Included are family photos, rare personal photos, photos of 1st draft manuscripts of many of his early poems. Also some biography and memoir materia
Under Amber Skies, written by author and poet Jill Eisnaugle, is a wonderful collection of rhyming poetry guaranteed to please every reader. In this, her second book, she writes of new friendships kindled, as well as old friendships solidified. She g
Chanti
Be safe,
Karen
Love, Taylor
Regis
Fee