My cries come out silent,
they come out in tears.
I pray so loudly
for so many years.
Nobody hears me,
they walk past; stone.
Nobody hears me,
or cares I'm alone.
Like the new approach and the structure of this one. The six-syllable first line and the four-syllable sixth line stand out amidst the other five-syllable lines, emphasizing the emotional themes of the poem. Well done. J.
Well I care, Brittany Renée; I'm sure I'm not the only one. I can empathize with how you feel because I often have these very same thoughts. Your poem is deeply emotive and meaningful. Thank you for sharing it. Love, peace, and strength to you,
Actually, I do hear; and I do care. You are an incredibly soulful and deeply passionate person, from what I can tell. I have missed your writing; your thoughts. -- Jeff
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on July 1, 2007
Beautiful writing,Hugssss
Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on June 30, 2007
Brief but beautifully crafted poem. The cries are never really silent for they are heard loudest in dreams.
My book of poetry is being redone by me, I have a beautiful cover designed and the book will have a few more than 200 poems in it. I am going to have it printed on demand here in Canada. When it is done I will let you know when it is done and if anyo
Selected poems from previous & forthcoming collections together with Q&R apps on each page to enable audio rendition simultaneously with the written text
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nice, enjoyable poem...
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