You have put together the totality of the experience of breaking up with someone/something and the aftermath the insues so well in so few words. There is a degree of ambiguity due to the shortness of the lines, while detail abounds, that lets the reader fill in particulars--this makes good writing in my opinion. J.
Sometimes the feeling of despair and lonliness is hard to capture but this one got the subject so beautifully. I am going through these same emotions so I know the feeling. Thank you Brittany for sharing such a deep thought.
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Michelle~
Richard
This poem reads almost like a Shakespearean tragedy. Congratulations!!!
Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*
Fee
with great feal and emotion...I liked this much.
Allen
Enjoyed the read.
Ch'erie