Unusual but I like the way it makes one wonder about this Princess and who she really is. Is she evil by design or designed by evil. Anyway I enjoyed...well done.
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Fee
Leaving the last line at six syllables really stresses your point. Well put together points. Find the last line of stanza two a tad bit cumbersome. However, your way of speaking to the corruption of the internet on people grabs the attention of the reader. "sign in sin" and "porn and scorn" are great turns. J.
Early Works is an exhaustive compilation of the first decade of the poems and stories of Z.B.McClure. Included are family photos, rare personal photos, photos of 1st draft manuscripts of many of his early poems. Also some biography and memoir materia
My book of poetry is being redone by me, I have a beautiful cover designed and the book will have a few more than 200 poems in it. I am going to have it printed on demand here in Canada. When it is done I will let you know when it is done and if anyo
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Michelle~
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Fee
Nice play on words to convey the disparity in life.