If You Were Here (poem) by Chessly Lynn Nesci on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Ed J.

Reviewed on April 14, 2012

I am a fan of rhyme and rhythm, you accomplish both with a very romantic message. I enjoyed this. Thank you

Reviewed by AGBO CHEKWUBE

Reviewed on January 8, 2012

Wish I were your pen,to be related to the great lines your thought conjure. That was lovely.

Reviewed by INNOCENT AGBO

Reviewed on January 7, 2012

Wish I were your pen,to be related to the great lines your thought conjure. That was lovely.

Reviewed by Steve Joos

Reviewed on November 14, 2011

The setting is a little bit beyond my pace, but the sentiment isn't. Nice work.

Reviewed by Dark Knight

Reviewed on October 9, 2011

wow.quite the romance in this poem--well done

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson

Reviewed on September 7, 2011

Love the setting You have
given for love making!!
~Chessly~
Forever to be in the glow!!!

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Raymond Sturgis (Reader)

Reviewed on September 3, 2011

Beautiful! Loved Every Word.

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on April 3, 2011

Yes, Chessly, there's much more to the beach at night than
stargazing. I wish I were there. -gene.

Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill

Reviewed on March 28, 2011

So sensually written! Erotic and playful.

Peace,
Dayvid

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on March 26, 2011

According to an MSN-poll (!!), the world's 4th most beautiful naturist beach is a mere 20-min drive away from me here in the UK; sadly, it is well-policed by wardens on beach-buggies who would put a rapid stop to any such sheet-play during the day... but the night, well, here's to more shed-sheets than at a Greco-Roman fancy-dress party! :)) And here's to the glow of such sunsets that go down very, very slowly... Wonderful image-play here, Chessly. xx

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on March 26, 2011

BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 25, 2011

Wow! That's my type of "activity," Chessly. Thank you for sharing this sensuous offering. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Reviewed on March 25, 2011

Chessly,

Very sensuous.

Mary

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on March 25, 2011

Wow!

Reviewed by Diana Wiles

Reviewed on March 24, 2011

So sensually uplifting...Roll on warm Summer nights on the beach!
Hugs, Diana..

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on March 24, 2011

...your love poem ignites & reminds us all
that lover's passion is so perfect
& sultry & delish
& the pic....is wonderful

Sandy Toes & More
Victoria

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on March 24, 2011

Never had any successful beach fun. Something about sand and friction. Patrick

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on March 24, 2011

A warm sensual write but one with so much truth that so many of us can easily relate to...well done Chessly
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Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on March 24, 2011

very sweet!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 24, 2011

you nailed this one Chessly! Great pic ,too!

Reviewed by Laura Fall

Reviewed on March 24, 2011

Such deep and heartfelt words indeed well done Chessly your friend Laura

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on March 23, 2011

PHRASES AND RHYME PRODUCE THE IMAGERY WHICH SUPPORTS YOUR THEME SOLIDLY. WELL DONE AND THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Mark Lichterman

Reviewed on March 23, 2011

Very loving, sexual words, Chessly.
Mark

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Reviewed on March 23, 2011

wonderful. ~Morgan

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on March 23, 2011

Stirring and passionate ;-)
Ooooh, yeah...
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on March 23, 2011

Hot stuff, Chessly!

John