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For Dayvid
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Your poem, It's Over, touched me, prompting me to write this.


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FOR DAYVID
 
When it’s over,
 
 it’s over. 

Or, is it?

Sometimes when it’s over for one

It’s still not over for the other.

What's right for one,

isn’t always right for both.  

So sad.   

Still, the sun rises on another beautiful day. 

Life goes on.

Hearts heal

,,,, hopefully….
 
 


© Copyright 2011 Richard Lee King,
Author of:
A Pursuit of Life & The Price of Freedom
 

 

 


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 Reviews of "For Dayvid"
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 29, 2011
you make some very valid points here!

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
Reviewed on January 28, 2011
yes life goes on, a reminder we all need from time to time.

Reviewed by Donna Chandler
Reviewed on January 27, 2011
You and I both know the pain of 'moving on' but the rewards can be wonderful once the courage is found to take that first step toward healing.

Donna

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on January 27, 2011
Beautifully written testiments of love still alive.


Peace
Tony

Reviewed by Chip Bergeron
Reviewed on January 27, 2011
You are right Richard....unfortunately, moving on sometimes doesn't come very easily....

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on January 27, 2011
Fine response. Hearts do heal but without being whole again. Patrick

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on January 27, 2011
Oooh, I like this response to Dayvid's fascinating work. And my feeling is, if one must leave to recover their life's joy, then they are very brave if they have the self-respect to be able to do so. They are doing the other one a favor by being honest. There is always ice cream, especially chocolate.
Your poem is insightful Richard!
Christine

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 27, 2011
Yes, that is the strength of the human heart...we can if we seek find the power to move on and survive even the most defastating heartache.
fee

Reviewed by Chessly Nesci
Reviewed on January 27, 2011
I just read his poem! Very heartfelt! If it's over you have to move on...Everyone deserves to be happy! These words of yours are so very true. Still the sun rises on another beautiful day! Life does go on and happiness will return. Love, and peace always! ~Chessly


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