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Debs chal -"MindScaping"
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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Sand trickled in, filling up the dome,
as if trying to take its shape,
but I resist this attempted mind scape.
I lay in this mind mirage suffering,
life trying to force its cruel offering.
The devil working full force,
trying to knock my soul off course.


Grans of sand so fine flowing,
my hour glass in time growing.
Will time defeat my efforts first,
or will I die in the mist of this knowledge thirst?
Words of power flicker bright,
as my mind attempts its poetic plight.


Onto many sites I landed,
trying to deal with a mind stranded.
Brought around by peer expression,
my mind gathers poetic lesson.
Words flowing through gather around my tree,
I am reading your poetry.


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 Reviews of "Debs chal -"MindScaping""
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 3, 2004
Very well done Grady!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 3, 2004
well penned response ...

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on May 2, 2004
Wonderful work here Grady...you did so well
with this...floria

Reviewed by anne cunningham
Reviewed on May 2, 2004
like the question in the middle, love the ending. very unique way of using the words in this challenge.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 2, 2004
Beautifully done Grady!Superb response!

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on May 2, 2004
Clearly a different facet of this challenge. Not only original but extremely well written. Lisa

Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on May 2, 2004
G, very nicely done! Bravo! -- Jeff

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 2, 2004
An excellent poem, Grady. You have met Deb's challenge exceedingly well!

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on May 2, 2004
GREAT take on "I am reading your poetry challenge"...Bravo...wonderful perspective...I like the way you have used those two lines and the clinical finish...


Debashish

Reviewed on May 2, 2004
Words of wisdom Grady.

~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~


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