Surface deep, pray all joy to keep. Eyes in blind, miss beauty of all kind. Souls miss bliss, diving too deep abyss.
Stacked atop each, small wonders teach. Provide as much joy, as a big wonder decoy. Nothing wrong with wanting the universe, except its blind curse. Enjoying nothing is worse.
The universe may never show up, it may blow up. It may never arrive, while one is alive. All the small joys, right in face deploys, may be the only enjoys. If you need a submarine, sea too deep seen. Surface deep, may joy keep.
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Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2004
There is always a lot more to your poetry than just surface deep Poet. Enjoyed the read.
This book consists of a 150 pages of Christian poetry about the end of time and the Second coming of Jesus Christ not as a servant but as a King, the King of kings. To bring righteousness and peace to the earth and restore the government of God! Peac
When two men hit the reset button and decide to go out looking for the good in the world, they not only find it but also a lot more.
P.S. The title is listed on Amazon under Look for Something Good by Robert Drews (not by Robert H. Drews)
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
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